All Comments on 'Falling for the First Time Ch. 04'

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MissMuse99MissMuse99over 8 years ago

Oh my god, A+! :)

Please don't take this the wrong way but I keep thinking at every new chapter "Are they finally gonna do it here??" And then I'm just slightly disappointed when the answer is no. Not yet. :)

I know. It's like I'm 12.

Excellent writing and development and this has quickly become one of favorite stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very old-fashioned

And entirely charming. Keep the chapters coming.

WatcherRobWatcherRobover 8 years ago

You keep playing with us in such a good way. Emmitt is such a gentleman.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice Work MissSummer

You're doing a great job building the relationship and playing with both his and her emotions.

A lot of sensual tension is rolling right through it. Each time there's a little bit more but not that awesome conclusion; when nothing else matters :)

MissMuse99, be strong. It'll be worth it :)

Looking forward to Ch 4.

Graham

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Omg amazing.

How long do we wait for the ch.5?? This is just amazing. Emmete is soooooo desirable. Everyone would want a lover like him. Post up the next chapter real soon.😍

MissSummerMissSummerover 8 years agoAuthor
Chapter 5

Thank you! Your encouragement truly helps!

I am currently working on the next chapter. I'm sorry it's not going to be coming in as frequently as the past chapters due to classes starting and just life in general.

Please, keep hanging in there! I'm hoping to get chapter 5 up very soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Updates???

Love this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
loving this!

Hey I'm really enjoying your story, it's always better when we can engage with the characters. Great job so far! I keep checking back for more. Lol

and good luck with school!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Loving the story

This is great! Hoping for a happy ending.

yesterdaysyesterdaysover 8 years ago

Another very sexy chapter.++++

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Feb. 7, 2020 Wow. So sorry. I know it's been a while. I'm trying to get back into it. I do receive your comments and I see when you favorite my stories, and start following me - I truly appreciate it. I don't like sharing much about my life, but these past 4 years have been...