All Comments on 'Falling Hard Ch. 00'

Why the hell is this necessary? Who cares? I'm sorry this might offend you but you're confusing your readers. Never a good thing.

What is happening? Please, can you clear some things up? I have no idea what is going on!!!

I love your story and I see that you put a prequil up and i was confused yet excited to read. i really didnt know why you would need a prequil unless it was about athan and rose. and then i read it and now im dissapointed because i feel like now i already know the ending to your story and yet your prequil seemed like something that might happen in 2 or 3 chapters from now so its not really a prequil at all...*sighs* I really dont know what to say about this one...i dont love it but i dont hate it

what the hell is going on

Do not see how this fits anything. Certainly not help your story at all!

Strangely.. I can see where this is going.. the end at the start.. somethin along those lines? yea well.. i for one can sort of see the connection.. unless its not tt ;0

I always read people's comments first and I was intrigued to see if this chapter was really as confusing as everyone made it out to be. I'm simply intrigued with the story now!! I want to know more about the characters and their situation, which generally means that you (the author) did good :)

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Well done!