All Comments on 'Falling in Love Pt. 01'

Looking forward to the part!

Five Stars! Cab;t wait for Part 2. More!

A dirty old man’s fantasy! Looking forward to the next installment.

Having read the first part o this intriguing story, I cannot help but wonder who is seducing who. You go, Devyn!

You wicked elder dirt, you present us with this horny little Devyn you show us all her womanly wiles and subject us to her pleading and orgasmic screaming, then you tell us we'll have to wait to see what happens next. All I can say is make sure she takes the pill before we have to follow her perverted little schemes further. You go Devyn/Devil, examine it carefully before you sign any prenup agreement. You little minx!!

You've set this up nicely and the route is fairly clear. But, you've also set up the more interesting part - how does a middle aged man have an intimate relationship with a teenager without attracting the opprobrium (at best) of society, his job, etc. I'm really looking forward to part 2.

Thank you

Yeah, wicked.......

Oh, come on, Brad! That little Asian cutie is practically throwing herself at you, and you are saying, "Let's wait," Get real and give her what she wants. After this teaser, Part 2 better very juicy!

Great beginning!

5

Reading the dialog is like hearing half a telephone call…please, please, please make it flow more normally and share both sides of the conversation. Beyond that, excellent story.

I love stories in which us old farts get to seduce and fuck (hey, I'll take a sucking mouth or an offered asshole any day) a willing Asian eighteen-year-old virgin like Devyn. Go for it, you dirty old man!