All Comments on 'Falling in Love with Your Stepsis'

Loved it. I only kissed my stepsister but I did take some panties on one visit and used them.

2nd person writing style renders this story unreadable.

Definitely heard on the 2nd person writing style. I realized that same thing myself after writing a few of these and have fully transitioned away from it on newer works. I'm still uploading some of my older works though, so these will still be in the mix until I clear the backlog.

Loved it. Beautiful and so romantic. The only change would be to add some backstory to it. They obviously cared for each other before he got caught with her panties. so some background would help the story.