All Comments on 'Falling in the Snow'

This left me breathless! I couldn't set the story aside till I had read through to the last line. Would love to read more of these two, or, if their tale is now complete, please share more stories!

I loved Sebastian and Silas together! A sequel of them getting married would be awesome! Great job!!

Hollín Smokes that was a beautifully writen and told Love Story.

Thank You. Please consider writing a following up stories.

Loved it!!

Brilliant. A moving and involving story well told and totally believable. It has put me in a mellow mood for the week-end - thank you JoYan. I keep smiling to myself visualizing Silas's sister's face when he phones to tell her that her car is stuck in snow hundreds of miles away, that he has used her rings for his engagement and that his fiance is a man!

Thank you so much for all your kind words! I'm so happy that you liked it!

Really enjoyed the story. Thank you. A sequel would be wonderful.

What a beautiful and thought-provoking love story. I enjoyed how the younger man really took the lead and wouldn't let go of what he believed in. I hope you keep writing and share with us more!

A truly beautiful love story.

Thanks again, guys!

whiteasianlvr, I love your nickname. I'm kinda the same ;)

Great story. It all fit together nicely. Kept me on edge. Very good contrasts were easily noted. No distractions , misspellings. Well done. You should be very proud of this work. Best wishes going forward with your life. Thank you, Bob

I have to agree with the other commenters, I could read more of this truly captivating love story but that’s just me being a greedy reader. I think my topmost thought is simply ’age is just a number’. Next my ego speaks up and I am excited by the pursuit of a younger man. Silas is reckless throughout but all in the name of love. And monogamy. Beautiful. You, JoYan, brought the ‘Lit’ and the Erotica’ in your first post. Five Stars and Following.

That's awesome, true storny

Wow! Great Story ❤

Excellent. You are ready for longer more complicated plots and I am hoping you keep writing!

One of the best romantic stories I’ve ever read. Ever. Beautifully done.

For someone whose first language is not English, you have done astonishingly well at spelling, grammar and the tone of you’re speech by the characters, loved this story so much.. please, please 🙏 keep writing, I’m so looking forward to more from you x

Love this so much❤️ hope you will write more amazing stories like this.