All Comments on 'False Alarm Ch. 06'

I loved it even though you are teasing us with the ending of this chapter.

I so enjoy this story that when I looded into my favorite section I wasn't expecting anything. To my surprize when I saw Ch.6 was out I was just too floored and happy. I'm so glad they are finally getting what they want and can't wait til the next ch.7 comes out.

Once again thanks for the early release. Snoopy Dance...lol

now , why do i envision a rather raucous fight between austin and sam, with fall out great than the single incident

Don't be one of those authors that stop a chapter at the beginning of sex and then leave it up to the readers' imaginations to complete the rest the next chapter. Please finish this scene at the beginning of ch7!

Another great chapter, glad that you posted two at the same time. This story is really good though you still need some editing done.

*SMHODOAO

smacking my head on desk over and over.....

If there is a call in the middle of this from Sam...I'm gonna find him and kick his ass myself....

Can't wait for 7, I'm happy Niala and Austin finally got their shit together to finally talk again!

Love these two!!!!!

Don't leave us hanging like last time

I ADORE THIS STORY IT IS SO ORIGINAL AND ELECTRIC IT IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES ON THIS SITE KEEP WRITTING CHICA

Yay! Such a great story I really love it, and its now one of my favourites! Hurry and post the next chapter, you cant leave us hanging like that! :-)

I really want to understand what the dynamic is with her child's father. Is he the one responsible for screwing her head up? Please clarify this. The sex is secondary at this point because the intrigue is in the mental/emotional sphere. You have built much around this. When everything on her end is out in the open; other aspects will flow or so I think, but you're the artist. I will most likely do a second total re-read of this. Await your next posting.

Happy holidays

has finally come for them, happiness...

Full on chick chubb over here... severe lady length for Austin............please edit