All Comments on 'Family Boundaries Ch. 02'

Incest does not share... This series is not for me, sorry...

Very fun and totally unlikely to ever happen, but so much fun reading, please let it continue.

It does seem like Riker is a bit submissive due to all the strong females in his home life, but if that’s what works for him and the story, so be it. Could also be that he just is lazy, and is fine with others controlling him?

A bit far fetched, naked at school? With no intervention by higher ups?

Ch. 01 -- Blockbuster! 👌

Ch. 02 -- Didn't quite do the justice, but it's the authors prerogative i guess 🤷

Waiting for Ri and Iz to consummate!! And also want to see which direction you take on Zoe x Ri!!

Josh looks a cool guy, would love to see what all he becomes a part of!

This by far is less than your best work.

Gee whiz,! Man you are so inventive it's almost obscene but it's also such good fun the way you have written it even mum's getting her oats too. That's what I call democracy. Love 'n' lust is not just for the young.

This is hot, looking forward to more of it.

Sub dudes are a turn off. Hopefully the story doesn't go that way much. Riker going around naked was kinda dumb. Ok really dumb, but it's just not working for this setting.

The thing between Helen and Athena could become the stuff of legends. We could see more of that.

I want to see how the middle sister gets integrated into all the sexy fun happening here.

Would like to see the characters have actual sex

I usually love your stuff, but couldn’t suspend disbelief enough to get through this one.

You've written an amazing story and, so far, it is an amazing series! Based on some of the comments, I can understand that it might not be for everyone, but please continue this series for those of us that do love it!

Really interesting twist..but please keep going seems like a really good story and having so much fun reading it.👍

Yeah, I realize that this is fiction and all. But no way in hell is a responsible adult teacher going to allow a naked student to remain in her classroom. At the very least she would find some reasonable way to cover up their genitalia and immediately send them directly to the nurse's office upon learning that the cause of their nudity was the theft of their clothing.

The name of your story says EVERYTHING that you should be doing inside of your story. Fiction can reasonably push the boundaries of reality. That's why we write it and enjoy reading it. But everything has boundaries, even fiction. When you exceed those boundaries, it stops being fiction and becomes a ludicrous fantasy. I honestly kept thinking that you would eventually transfer the readers out of the scene by converting it into a dream sequence attributed to one of the characters. That's just how bizarre and ridiculous I found it to be.

It totally ruined the chapter for me. 2/5

Riker walking around school naked is one of the more ridiculous things I've read and I don't hate it. That was fun. I get the feeling that the twins may soon confide (and maybe more?) in Diane... just a feeling. Looking forward to future chapters. 5/5*

Jesus fucking Christ, this is the hottest thing I've read in a very long time. Bravo, 10/10

the absolute best!

Absolutely hilarious. Author! Author!

Can't decide if it's more humorous, or more scorchingly hot...

You lost me with this one. I don't expect realistic plots from porn but this one is just ridiculous.

Your fiction has become full-blown fantasy - and even more fun!

I also thought - ridiculous - when he started walking around. Then maybe a dream sequence was coming because we've all had those. No high school student would be confident enough to do it, let alone keep doing it for 1/2 a day. This was the only time I've actually stopped reading one of your stories. (I went back)

I can't say it better than ScottishTexan did below. Same for me.

Screw the haters, I think the world you're creating is a fun escape from reality and I'm loving the slow build up.

Another excellent chapter, crazy and over the top sure but it’s an incest fantasy story. I don’t understand why people can’t accept it for what it is a fantastic story featuring a whole lot of hot kinky sex. I love it!

Meh, who cares about reality when this is so hot. Just think of it like a French farcical sex comedy. Great chapter.

Enjoyed the first part, but then naked walking around school is just repeating futa club. Just lost interest at that point.

I gave it 5/5, and l know it’s just fantasy,but lMHO it was too over the top.

River would be expelled no doubt. The two teachers sacked, and professionally ruined.

Why? Because kids would go home and tell their parents exactly what happened and the above result guaranteed.

It set the story back a bit, just too unrealistic.

Oh, and before l forget, A little something l have said before to Xarth.

And so will say again, incest does not share.

The setup is brilliant and I appreciate the slow burn.

But the naked in school thing was silly. No, not silly. Frankly it was stupid. Never could have happened past the first 2 minutes.

A friend of mine’s son got stupid drunk at a house party in college. In his blackout, he stripped naked and fell asleep on the front lawn. When the police woke him the next morning they pointed out he was 1/2 block away from a school on a school morning. He’s now on the sex offender list.

Same would have happened to Riker since he’s over 18.

And I'm with Shadracht, who wants reality when chaos is this good! Turn it into a french movie with subtitles that no one reads!

Xarth I have been reading your stories for over 2 year's now and they only get better and better. Thank you for this upload. Don't stop, ever. Lol but if you do don't let it be because of the hate. Great stuff!

This story went stupid sideways, but still absolutely fun!

I thought it was outstanding! Who hasn't had this type of fantasy, who hasn't had thoughts very similar to this? I'm an exhibitionist and I love watching others practicing the Kink.

This story is one of the most stupid things I have ever read. I cannot even comprehend why it was even written.

DOS

Hilarious and hot. Getting me to laugh while jerking off is a rare gift.

Seems a little far-fetched, but I've been out of high school for decades. Accepting the scenario, Xarth's work always flows naturally.

This is GREAT...so silly and stupid...I am going from page to page with anticipation of the "next great thing" for all of them...gets better and better with each word!!

Reality...MMMEEEHHHHHH!!!!!! Who needs it...the last 2 1/2 years have been a world-wide shitshow, and I, for one, want this kind of entertainment in my day!!!!!!

Five**5**Stars...absolutely...🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🤨💥💥💥💥💥💥💯🌋🌋🌋🌋🌋

Crazy fun. Good job.

Fun, ridiculous, over-the-top, and yes, unbelievable; but for those who say fiction crossed the boundaries into fantasy, who says this isn’t a fantasy? Just go with the flow, enjoy the outrageous situations. And, BTW, I like that Sister shared; again, who sets these “rules“ for incest?

I'll give it a 4/5. I like the twin relationship but the school part was too embarassing for me

This chapter is... so fucking stupid, with every page, it's just plain idiotic, can't bring myself to read further... rating 1/5, lets hope it gets better next chapters

Not at all plausible. I loved it. Great fictional story! The naked-in-class thing is the stuff fantasies are made of. I mean, who fantasizes about real life, anyway?

I like your writing style but I didn’t like this chapter. The story line is not believable. Couldn’t wait for it to be over with. Disappointing.

Naked in class, forced to stand at the white board, with a pre-cum leaking hard-on, making yourself, the teacher, your twin sister, and half the class horny, then having two pretty, naked, High-School girl track runners suck you off in the school bathroom with your twin and another slut watching the whole time? HOOOOTTTTT!!!!! Love this whole series, keep up the great work!

Chapter one was pretty good, but this chapter is terrible. Completely unbelievable, why wouldn't he wrap a towel around himself and go to the gym teacher's or principal's office?

Two female teachers allowing him to stay in class nude would destroy their careers, regardless of him being 18.

I hope the next chapter is better.

Your vivid imagination tickled all my right spots