All Comments on 'Family Business'

I hope there is more to cum!!!

The main character, Mike, is an asshole. How can he be so naive if his parents own and operate a swing club? And how long is he going to be a drag for his girlfriend? If he were more enthusiastic, the story would came across much hotter.....just my opinion.

The first 3/4 of the story moved great, you understood his conflict and then he suddenly had anal sex with his mother with little reference to his conflict or where the story goes from here after his girlfriend has sex with his dad, makes out with his mother etc. Too abrupt an ending.

Why would a mother call her son, sweaty? Had he been exercising by running down the hall? I think you meant "sweetie".

You need a proofreader and an editor.

that is a great one, the best one i had read on this site

What can I say: more, please!

Love family incest tales,,this is a really good one,,thanks, and more please

This is my favorite story. I've read it dozens of times. Please please please more!!!!!

You really need to expand on this, wonderful story and could be taking in so many directions, please write part 2,3,4........

I hope to read more of this wonderfull story.

No other way to say it, but this shit was weird. The girlfriend and parents going full-mental on page 3... That was some weird shit.

loved it. very sexy

Nice started a little slow but picked up with a great ending

Did your dad knock up your girlfriend

Oh my God

This is one of my all time favorite stories on lit. Very, very hot!

Most interesting story. Unlike a prior comment, I thought it was well paced and you let the sex develop rather than rush into slam-bang.

Great Storytelling!

Very erotic. Always had this kind of fantasy sharing wife with parents.

nice thanks. part 2 would be amazing

The way you describe the whole setting like ambient and people is so superb that character development of characters and sex scenes sometimes look pale in comparison. That improved in your newer story "FAMILY VACATION PLUS 1" I hope you continue to write.

Needs more, lacked really good sex

Next chapter

Do-so story - 'Twould seem that Michael is not exactly the brightest bulb on the porch - That this turned into a BDSM event was a turn off for me - Mike never did get to actually properly fuck his mother except for her ass . . . .