All Comments on 'Family Business Ch. 01'

Hell yes. I hope she gets pregnant.

More of this please! I’d love to see Ashley try to be more defiant!!

Am I the only one who wants to see Ashley dominating them? She has the right mindset. And controlling interest my ass. You cant transfer what you dont own. Every lawyer in the world would take her case, it free money :D

Stupid

Always enjoy your work - keep it up

I hope Ashley overcomes them in the end. If not it's ok because I liked your stories so far.

All she needs to do is get a lawyer, given what Dan has done a lawyer in the good ole USA would pick up the ball and run with it. Money to be made.

I suspect this may well be rubbish but l’ll read on see.

Thus far 3/5

I am somewhere between stupid and keep it up. Your previous stories demand you get at least three chapters to develop your ideas.

Unlike another comment, I'm all in on, this is stupid. Whether she returned or not, she would have left right away and called law enforcement. Hell, she was just raped. She's not dumb and you don't need a degree in anything to get a job somewhere. Besides, she has to have friends.

This is FANTASY you guys, there is nothing real about, nothing that mirrors real life. In this world there is only what the author puts in the world. How hard can it be to understand?