All Comments on 'Family Campground Pt. 01'

Good start. It’s nice to know that the mother has pubic hair.

continue with the story

THERE is NO stopping NOW ..... GET ON WITH IT . I have a semi and Need to complete this

Heck of a place to end the chapter, seems like half of a story. This story has a lot of potential and looking forward to many more chapters.

Definetly needs a second chapter to this story

nice start.

Dr beulahtemick; Nice beginning, but for God's sake lose the pubes, who wants hair in their teeth.

Next chapter

Well, I feel like I have been dropped into the middle of a situation with no who/what/where or why. No explanation for the scene or the situation. Perhaps chapter 2 will be a flashback to how we arrived here. At any rate, it could have been better developed as a first chapter.

I never criticise anyone for going to the effort of posting a story here, and I am not going to begin now, except to say no one is going to be impressed with the body of 40 + male who only works out twice a week.

This is going to be a good story. Ch 1 was little short; j am looking forward to reading more. 5 stars to start

Very promising start. Can't wait for the next instalment

Can't wait for chapter 2

This is a great start to a story that I can see having many chapters. Don’t let the naysayers get you down. We all have had a “first story” and continued to become good story tellers.

This could even turn into a “living at home nude” chapters when they realize they enjoy each other’s bodies on display.

Nice story. Love the setting. Thank you.

Awesome thanks for the memories of yesteryear. Can't wait for chapter 2.

Enjoyed Part 1. Now onto Part 2. Love the topic and the nudist campground setting.

Think this is a good start. I would have liked to see a little more intro behind the trip to the camp.

Five rating, you include pubic hair on females! I will look at other chapters.

Good start. I look forward to the next chapter. And PLEASE don't listen to the pubic hair haters!

"Kinda nice start"...a few small issues, expected of a new author...

I am anticipating an excellent read here, y'all; this first chapter has piqued my interest, and there is OBVIOUSLY interest from ALL family members...Piper's traitorous pussy gives her away.

Five**5**🤩 Stars...good for you, "readyfreddy 555"