by readyfreddy555
"Kinda nice start"...a few small issues, expected of a new author...
I am anticipating an excellent read here, y'all; this first chapter has piqued my interest, and there is OBVIOUSLY interest from ALL family members...Piper's traitorous pussy gives her away.
Five**5**🤩 Stars...good for you, "readyfreddy 555"
Good start. I look forward to the next chapter. And PLEASE don't listen to the pubic hair haters!
Five rating, you include pubic hair on females! I will look at other chapters.
Think this is a good start. I would have liked to see a little more intro behind the trip to the camp.
Enjoyed Part 1. Now onto Part 2. Love the topic and the nudist campground setting.
This is a great start to a story that I can see having many chapters. Don’t let the naysayers get you down. We all have had a “first story” and continued to become good story tellers.
This could even turn into a “living at home nude” chapters when they realize they enjoy each other’s bodies on display.
This is going to be a good story. Ch 1 was little short; j am looking forward to reading more. 5 stars to start
I never criticise anyone for going to the effort of posting a story here, and I am not going to begin now, except to say no one is going to be impressed with the body of 40 + male who only works out twice a week.
Well, I feel like I have been dropped into the middle of a situation with no who/what/where or why. No explanation for the scene or the situation. Perhaps chapter 2 will be a flashback to how we arrived here. At any rate, it could have been better developed as a first chapter.
Dr beulahtemick; Nice beginning, but for God's sake lose the pubes, who wants hair in their teeth.
Heck of a place to end the chapter, seems like half of a story. This story has a lot of potential and looking forward to many more chapters.
THERE is NO stopping NOW ..... GET ON WITH IT . I have a semi and Need to complete this