All Comments on 'Family Campground Pt. 12 - Final'

I do hope you write more stories, this was hot! But dont rush them, please

To bad the 2 families didn't get together---wonderful story!!

that was really good ,how about another story?

Love the story in the campground. I would like to know what happened when they got home from the trip

Super hot series. 5 stars

I've enjoyed the series. Thanks for sharing it!

NOOOOOO,keep going.more please

I loved the story, however I felt that you left a plot hole wide open. With Piper's burgeoning sexual awakening, I thought that she would be having an encounter the older gentleman on the lake's shoreline. Since she was always noticing him with a different young girl. Though it was evident in the beginning that she felt revulsion at the sight of him banging away on some willing young participant. But, as the story progressed, it sounded like she was indifferent and maybe a chance encounter with the man was in the works. Maybe I'm wrong, but it looked like it was going to happen. Great story. 👍

I wish you wouldn't stop this series was great

Perfect ending to a scorching hot story - I want to go to this place!

I enjoyed all twelve parts. Whatever you write next, I know will be just as hot, or hotter. Thank you for the story.

Don't end this here. So many more things and combonations of people could happen . One of the better series I've read in a long time

This was by far one of the most entertaining and hot stories that I have read on here.

Sure it sounds like fun, but what are the resort's Trip Advisor ratings?

Thank you readers, I so appreciate all your feedback throughout the series and I'm sorry for the occasional typos, I will be more careful in the future. I also appreciate the feedback about the many roads not taken or fully explored. I seriously considered going longer with this story, but once I wrote about the O'Neil's first sexual encounters with each other, I felt the story had reached its climax and natural conclusion. Please follow me if you liked it so that if I write more stories you will find them. Warm regards, Freddy.

Surely fwor stars but I've given all the chapters five. Best series I've read in a long time. Hope you keep posting. Would love to see how the meal with Summers family turned out

So sad this is the end... Absolutely love your writing!

Not usually a fan of these kind of stories but the tone from the beginning was light-hearted and the chapters were short, with good writing, an interesting plot, and consistent intersperseal of love between the characters made your story hot and an enjoyable read. Thanks for writing and sharing this one. 4.5/5

I really hope there are addition series like this from you... very nicely done...

Hi, I would request you finish the vacation. The beginning of the story is they were staying a week. By finishing out the week, you will have nice clean ending and won't have to worry about a perpetual story. It also gives you an option for further books, like year 2 changing characters/plots around.

Please finish the week. You hinted at a two family orgy, plus other situations....

Thank you for writing and reading my request.

It would be nice to finish the story. No more characters are needed. I was actually looking forward to piper fucking the old guy

Well done, I would encourage yo u to keep writing. There are several stories that can branch off from this one; or you could ( as others have suggested) finish off their vacation.

Even if you choose not to finish or continue this series there are other genre that I am sure you would do well in writing. Thanks again for the great story

Great story and short chapters made it easier to keep the characters straight. Well written. Please continue. Perhaps Kevin could have a gay experienice with the two brothers mentioned in one of earlier chapters?

Oh, what can I say? What happens at the two family dinner? Was there a two family orgy? I like to know what happens when they get HOME. Any more family members? Let's hear more please.

Freddy, loved the story! Great writing and very stimulating. i had to take multiple breaks while reading ;)

What an exciting story to read. You write well.

My only complaint is the one-page stories. other than that, I loved it. It's truly great stuff. this could go on for quite some time almost in novel fashion. but obviously, it would have to end at some point and I guess this ending is as good as any other. i know if I ever won the lottery, I would absolutely try to make a place like this. I've thought about that even before reading these stories but now it makes me want to even more lol. I just need the money.