All Comments on 'Family Camping Trip Ch. 03'

I liked it especially now that it's strictly family but it was pretty short as compared to the first two chapters and it was more teasing then actual sex. Hopefully, in chapter 4, the mom and aunt will get active with the others and each other.

Tension caused by doubts and worries is a good thing.

You have a world of options to take .... Bottom line hope continue on .

Your writing is excellent .... keep up great work

Please keep this going. You have left us all hard and begging for more.

This is one of your best series.

So many exciting characters and all HORNY.

Wish I knew what you will do with Jenny after they get home.

They can't stay together as Bro/Sis but they blend so well.

I guess Leave us hanging with our hard cocks in our hands

Great story hope you will finish it.

This has been one scorcher of a story. Please continue and bring the story to a proper conclusion.

love this story. i hope there's another installment - or even 2!!! well written. good characters, love the plot line!! MORE!

It'd be great to read about aunt mary and eventually Trevor pounding the shit out of shy little Chris while everyone's sleeping.

I know, sometimes I get a little tired of writing the same story too but, sorry guy, you need to tie things up just a bit better than that. Just the same, I really enjoyed the story on the whole. Good read and lots of fun.

Now that he has started with Chris. Dee should be Next then Aunt Mary to have done all of the Women in the Family. it would be nice to get Dee Pregnant and have her Ex get Jealous wondering who and when.

This episode was great as far as it goes, but it really feels like a cliffhanger than needs a little bit more to be complete. The first two episodes were nicely complete in themselves, but this one feels like it should have run a few paragraphs more. What happens when Trevor wakes up in the morning? There ought to be a setup for some interesting situation that might happen later in the day or later in the trip, which would then lead to a next episode, or could happen in another page or two of this episode. There are at least three characters (four counting Chris) that haven't really had a chance to come out and play.

I'm liking the setup and obviously Russel and Mary will have already been fucking Dee and Chris (maybe why they're so obnoxious and quiet, respectively). I'm almost hoping that you posted this so-short chapter because you're having writers' block - if you're posting it just to feed the beast, tell the beast to piss off: the stories so far have been great, enjoyable, well-paced, and in great settings. (I liked the old women in chapter 2!) If you planned to do a shorter story fine but I feel your longer work is better. If you're pleased with what you're writing, that's the most important thing. Thanks for sharing!

Are you going to continue this story, pretty neat. Enjoyed it.

When a good story is left unfinished. Please do a wrap up like all your other stories.

time for more camping stories!!! this is a great one - but would be better with another chapter or 2 to wrap it up. thanks for the great read.

Can't believe that you left us hanging with them on the boat. Please continue this so we can enjoy all the story.

This is one of the best stories on literotica. will there be any new chapters? Please let me know.

Thanks,

Ted

bi_ted@hotmail.com

I think this is amazing story, please give us more chapters. After the first two I was hooked.

MORE! Please, my God, MORE!

We need the next chapter of this sexy series

Keep going!!! Love to see sister/brother fall in love

Hey, are you planning on writing the next chapter?

This was really good and I would love to read more chapters of this story!

Thanks :)

I wish you would continue on with another chapter!!

Wish there was more to this section.

Add more chapters please

Please there needs to be more

Done.

I'm disappointed that you stopped the series here. This was the best yet with a numbers of potential storylines to go.

I'm definitely wishing there was more!!! Great story telling and super sexy. 5/5

(9/3/2021) This was an enjoyable read, but I must say that it was too short, way too short only being two pages. Also, there is a 4-year gap between this third chapter and the fourth which you submitted 3 months ago. I guess I feel fortunate that I caught this series now and didn't need to wait out those 4 years. I hope this next chapter is a long one and with no conclusion,... yet. I would like to recommend a sequel series taking place with all the characters including the three Bi ladies from the previous chapters. Maybe in a different setting like in college back home. The possibilities are endless. 5 stars of course. Again, well done.

I'm even better off than Mr data the story now being complete ? 5 stars also.

Keeping me hard. 5 + stars

Missed a real opportunity to show the siblings getting closer with NO DESCRIPTION of what they did after the end of the last chapter, and hinted at in the beginning of this chapter.

A lot of sex going on though....