All Comments on 'Family Curse'

Yeah, It could go some intriguing places.

Interesting story! A part of me wishes I could be Gene/Gina

I wish this had happened to me. I would be happy to a lesbian.

This makes me wonder what Gene would have done at that party if he was there since Jake was his best friend. I wish Jake would have had his head caved in for pulling that kind of crap on his best friends cousin which was also his sisters girlfriend although trying that shit on anyone is grounds for execution in my book.

"We aren't certain but think it has to do with sexual activity." I just cant get over what a piece of shit the mom is for hiding everything while hes going trough it

Interesting story.

I think the dialog could be better integrated, it feels like the rhythm of the story is “bunch of dialog” then a big blob of narration, then more dialog.

I’d enjoy more conflict or hidings based around the concept, like maybe Gene/Gina flips a few times or has to deal with the consequences of the transformations more.

Overall a fun read though.

So mom was a girl and stayed a girl. Aunt was a boy and became a girl. If a female has sex with a male she remains a woman (his mom). So Aunt was a boy that became a girl and stayed a girl. How? Did she have lesbian sex yet the mom said they never encountered a lesbian situation before? Did the Aunt have no sex that month or any other full moon period?

You really need to add dialog tags. Following conversations becomes quite frustrating otherwise. It also robs your writing of being able to add in non-verbal cues that accompany speech.

I liked the story wishing a magic pill could change my gender overnight or a full moon doing the same! Sadly it just doesn't work that way! I wish I was 18 to start over but becoming transgendered later in life has created many tumultuous heartaches with family even moving forward to be complete with surgery. To the author I've enjoyed your stories yearning to having it all!

I found it odd that the only people Gina/Gene had contact with during the first month of the transition that knew him were Gene's best friend Jake, Jake's sister Rachel, and her/his mother. It is unlikely given proximity to all their childhood haunts and the fact that Rachel would probably know a lot of the same people they wouldn't run into someone else they knew. It would be interesting to see how Gina would react to these situations. Does Gina remain "butch" after the transformation is permanent? Does Gina ever shave her legs and underarms, try on a skirt and by extension hosiery, learn about makeup? She may deny the aspects of what some consider feminine early or at least when the transition may not be permanent, but as time goes on one would expect her to become curious

I'm like Lisa, I wish there was a magic pill to transform me. My family doesn't know about Synthia and I am petrified of how they would react if they knew. I feel alone in my world.