All Comments on 'Family Drama Pt. 05'

Wow, that was hot. Can't wait to see how the story ends!

I love your writing style and your enthusiasm. This episode did lack a little editing. The story was still very hot and you always have that touch of romanticism. Please keep up your hard work. Thanks again for writing it's much appreciated 😊👍

Loved all the parts of this that you've written to this point. If you need an editor, I'm glad to help.

Keep writing!

Why didn't you finish this before you submitted it? You have ruined the mood you set in your story line. Most of your readers won't read your conclusion. To bad to because with all the babies piping out, Dad getting really cuck, and the wives finally realizing they are part of a harem, it might be time for David to get out of Dodge. To bad we will never know. It's not nice being left hanging.

XYZ

I've been waiting for this installment for so long now and it didn't dissapoint!!!

Keep up the good work.