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But if Ben heard her pleas, he ignored them. Instead he just tightened his grip on her head, shoved her face harder against his shoulder, and flew forward with one, two, and then a third especially brutal pump between her legs before he exploded deep inside her helpless young pussy. Mia felt that cock twitch and spurt, its warm semen bathing her insides, that throbbing shaft giving her womb all it had to offer. Its heat practically felt like a branding iron to her soul as the finality of her first ever rape seared itself into her psyche.
He trembled on top of her, his cock swimming inside her as he pumped a few more times and wrung out the final drops from his overworked balls. Then, with even his own muscular arms trembling and weakened from the intensity of his efforts, Ben slowly drew back and looked down at her. He looked her in the eye as she lay there panting, raped, defeated, cum seeping between her legs.
"Mmm. That was beautiful, bitch. You look so sexy now, just violated, with that haunted look in your eyes," he mocked, following it up by swooping down and bruising her lips with a cruel and possessive kiss.
The petite Vietnamese girl could only lay there and stare upward listlessly at the ceiling.
'This really happened,' she thought. 'I've been raped.' The enormity of it was something she couldn't seem to digest. And then, to add insult to injury, she heard Ben chuckle and looked toward where his sound of cruel mirth was coming from.
"Well, well, well. It looks like your boyfriend enjoyed the show we gave him. He likes watching his girlfriend's pussy get FUCKED, doesn't he? Look at that cock!" Ben boomed.
And sure enough, as Mia's gaze followed her captor's words, she saw it then, in all its shameful glory: Zane sat there miserably cuffed to the chair, but his cock was stiff and hard, as tall as she'd ever seen it.
She didn't even have time to feel revulsion or anger toward her boyfriend though. Suddenly Mia's attention was drawn to the two struggling women hurtling toward her.
"Please don't do this! This is wrong!!! Get out of my house!" Charlotte screeched.
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END OF PART 6. TO BE CONTINUED...
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AUTHOR'S NOTE:
I just can't resist based on some reader messages I received. There will be at least one more chapter before this story is complete. Part 7 will be coming soon...
Hugs,
~Kitty
- COMMENTS
DamiCLove4 months agoKitty, keep going & plz don't stop. The shame of Mia's bf was a nice touch near the end there. How will Mia react I wonder and what will she tell her bf if she gets a chance to call him on it? Charlotte's going to be in so much trouble if(when?) this is all over...
As to the previous commenter, Literotica is a website about not just eroticism but *fantasies* (some more or less real) and IMHO the humiliation/shame/torment aspect is a big part of the turn-on here. I can suspend a little disbelief in the process, and a history lesson on rape post WWII just seems way out of place here. Maybe calm down? "Being raped isn't cruel or erotic." So much wrong with that. Many, many, many people have non-con or rape fantasies... to them it is erotic on some level, so why are you here in a non-con story saying otherwise? Makes no sense. As for rape being not 'cruel'? Ummm.. it's by definition cruel on some level, or certainly can be. Take a deep breath.
Whackdoodle5 months agoAre you trying to put your victims in the hospital? Hot sauce isn’t a disinfectant, it’s a poison. You risk blood poisoning and a nasty infection. It isn’t cruel, it’s stupidly dangerous.
Being raped isn’t cruel or erotic. It is traumatizing to the victim. Years later it affects them and will require therapy to overcome.
I get you’re trying to write an erotic story but rape isn’t erotic. After WWII, Russian soldiers went on a rape rampage. Russian author Solzhenitsyn wrote about how his squad raped and murdered an 11 yr old German girl. German women endured it because they thought they deserved it. Fmr German Chancellor, Helmut Kohl’s wife was a rape survivor. After the soldiers finished with her, they threw her from a second story building, causing her decades of pain and agony. She would later commit suicide because of what she endured.
One of the methods gangs use to turn women and teens into prostitutes is to subject them to weeks of gang rape. In Britain, young girls and teens were groomed into sexual servitude by being raped repeatedly. Rape destroys the victims soul and has lasting consequences.
I don’t care if you rape your story victims 7 ways from Sunday; but to ignore the consequences of that is unforgivable. It’s like writing a story about amputating a musicians hands and then telling us how he performed “Mozart Marriage of Figaro” flawlessly the next day.
TwistedDaveAuthor5 months agoKitty, you have an amazing and twisted mind. I love it. Please make the final chapter long and extremely disturbing. The hot sauce was deliciously cruel. Take the torture and demeaning to the next level, but please... No scat. Water sports... Yeah, mom, sis and girlfriend laying on the floor in front of Zane. Make mom truly regret what she has done. Maybe the rapists tell everyone about Mom's at the begining on the next chapter. Whatever you do, I know it will be entertaining. Thank you for sharing your talented imagination.
