All Comments on 'Family Issues Ch. 09'

It finally happened, and it was wonderful!

I have been binge-reading this entire series since around 8pm. I was getting to the end of it and you posted chapter 9 as I was finishing chapter 7.

Had you not posted chapter 9 tonight, I would have finished with 8 and gone to sleep saddened.

But chapter 9 righted all those wrongs, and now I can't wait for 10. And 11. And 12 and 13.

This matchup was teased for far too long... and yet you've still go so many threads of the story to tie together, can't wait for the next installment

another awesome chapter. this story ticks a lot of boxes for me. thanks for posting this story.

I understand everything but the Bulgakov's novel was a genius satire. Please do not mention it in this context... I believe that he will turn over in a coffin

I am glad they told each other they were in love.

Maybe they could get married before they return , oh Diana and Nadine would have a fit.

Oh, you beautiful bastard!

I literally read the entire scene between Helen and Kevin over again word for word just to make sure I wasn't dreaming it. Was it worth the wait? Oh, it was worth it. Of course, now I'm terrified of what evil awaits our star-crossed lovers. But just like the characters; I ain't gonna let it ruin this high.

The Diana POV put me off a bit(no surprise there though). Kind of hard to believe an FBI agent would be that susceptible to her or anyone else's charms. Also because seeing Diana afraid just isn't enough anymore; now she needs to actually start paying for her cruelty. The rest of the chapter was fantastic though.

It's incredible to me how seamlessly you transition from humor, to drama, and back again. The endless banter that Kevin and Helen have together makes the story worth reading alone. But then you hit us with scenes like the ones that ended these last two chapters. Just amazing.

So I'm always anticipating the next installment, but the wait this time is definitely going to be even tougher.

And I hate to disagree but 4 chapters doesn’t sound like nearly enough! Now if Kevin only tells her everything that’s going on Helen can go home and clean house USMC style before their happily ever after. So at least 10 more chapters.

Great work as usual. Thanks for sharing

Best chapter so far! Thank You!

Beautifully written scene. Helen and Kevin and then the surprise of Kevin and Helen and the dual cherry popping. So now that they both know where they stand (or lie 😊) with each other it’s time for Valkyrie to live up to her name. Time for Herja to show not only her battle skills but her love for her hero.

Worth a 6⭐️

I really hope helen makes kevin her bottom only bitch

I’m already in need of the next chapter, I started reading last night hoping to get a quick cum, but I got so much more. I couldn’t stop, I read right through all of them and having Kevin and Helen finally, Finally, FINALLY admit their feelings to both them selves and each other warmed my heart. You deserve to be published, your scenes are brilliantly written and I love every character (except Suza, Diana and Marienne, I love to hate them though), even Nadine is endearing. You write so smartly and I absolutely love how everything coincides with history. You are so much more than a smut writer, this is a crime/suspense/dram/romance/comedy story with steamy scenes that add to the fun. With an editor and a publisher, you’d be a force to be reckoned with. You’ve earned all of the stars

Well done. From one writer to another, you have truly outdone yourself!

When you uploaded chapter 7, I had left a review indicating my dissapointment with my feeling that you had lost sight of the plot, thus I am glad to see I was mistaken. Helen and Kevin's heart to heart was perfect and we'll worth the wait. What's more, you didn't make it cliche like many of the stories here sadly, but made their lovemaking realistic (which I know is a weird choice of words for a story involving futa women, lol) by writing Helen as someone with no experience in the bedroom. Am looking forward to seeing how you advance the story!

I know another reviewer asked you to make Kevin Helen's bottom bitch, but I think their relationship works fine the way it has been presented in the chapter with their roles being versatile.

Loved it. Once again a fantastic chapter in a fantastic story. Each chapter is a high quality story. You are a wonderful writer with lots of talent. Thank you for sharing your talent with us here. I always look for the next chapter everyday. I am saddened that there are only 4 chapters left however I am sure they will be fantastic also.

Nothing else to say, other than...perfect, thank you for all your work

Its impressive to enjoy your characters grow with each installment besides the obvious please dont take the easy way out thr hooks are pleasent and the finish could be should be epic please keep up the gr8 work u can do better good on u

For once I have nothing to say, you really outdid yourself there, if you're not a professional writter by now then maybe you should consider it.

I have been expecting that moment since chapter 3, thinking I would finally enjoy the pleasure of fapping to a consensual erotic scene.

In the end, I did no such things, this chapter is one of those that sets your mind and your heart ablaze, not your groin.

There was no rape, no SM stuff, no dominant, no submissive, no golden shower, no wild animalistic lust.

Just two souls finding each other, two hearts beatting in perfect unison, just love.

And it was beautiful,

it was honest,

it was mesmerizing,

it was soothing,

Just like a David Bowie song.

I wish I could give you more than five stars because this story deserves it. I haven't been so emotionally invested in fictional characters for a long long time

I haven't been this engrossed in a story since I was in high school. I can't wait to see how this story ends but also dread it as well since I love reading every new chapter

It's ridiculous how good this story is. I agree with the earlier comment; if you're not considering a professional writing career, maybe you should.

This is an amazing story! And it doesn't hurt that the sex is really hot. You really need to get somebody to make this into an animation miniseries.

I love this story, the chemistry between Kevin and Helen is so intense! The dinamic with Diana and the others thrown in there keeps you reading simply because your waiting for it to happen between Kevin and Helen. Well worth the read. Thank you for writing this fabulous story.

It get better everytime i still want to know how big is Helen cock you tease so much with appearence description but never put sizes plllllls

I would read this even without the sex scenes

NEXT!!!!!!

I've been waiting for Kevin and Helen to hook up!! I'm not even that into Futanari anymore but I have to know how they will solve the problem with Diana. I hope that Helen has a happy ending with Kevin, lord knows she deserves it more that anyone else.

I love this series so much. I hope that once he sees Helen naked with the lights on you go into graphic description of her whole body, especially her cock measurements and it bests even her sister.

First time I've ever orgasmed without even touching myself

ok, so look. I stayed up for hours to read this whole thing and even without the porn I'd fucking read it. I just want everything to be resolved and people to be happy. I need a happy ending, ok?

"I don't want to be your friend anymore, Helen."

You made my heart fall off a fucking cliff, you bastard.

10/10 abuse me more.

Omg I'm so happy! Helen and Kevvy are together and that's what I've wanted since like chapter 2 and it's even better than expected. I really want to see what Diana does tho, hoo boy that's gonna be interesting.

I'm loving this series even more now. I hope Helen finds a way to get him out of this mess and they have as close to a storybook ever after as possible

I don't like rape stories, abuse or giant cocks. That being said this is BY FAR the best "sex" story I've ever read. I've been hard more times than I care to count and couldn't be bothered to do anything about it because I just had to continue the story! Hope you make it big someday as a writer!

I just wanted you to know I was pissed When I got to " The club had good vibes flying..." Playing with my emotions jumping to the club right when Kevin and Helen got a room. Shame on you. Side note I am loving the story though.

i only read this for the plot (first time I have said that and actually meant it)

There's 4 more chapters to go? I guess that should be "at least 4 more chapters to go," because you might end up splitting some of the chapters. Either way, I'm actually gonna have to come back to this series to vote on this cluster****???

That is genuinely disheartening.

Such a great build up ! I've been rooting for those two for a long time ! SO worth the wait,,,,,, the love making was extra HOT !! Best damn story I've found on here yet !! Now I can't wait to finish reading the remaining chapters,,,, guess no sleep for the wicked tonight ....

Why is it keeping me from going to sleep? Why is your writing so good? You're cruel, really cruel.

Now all that’s left are the final showdown with Diana and the little issue of the restaurant. And more great sex with Kevin and Helen!!!

I've been staying up until 4am reading them when I get home, and I love them. I love every moment of them, but this one so far has been my favorite. Even though Kevin is a complete little slut I like him so much. And I adore Helen. Thank you.

There is an old saying, the modern version is "A part of every is the end". Sometimes writers juggle too many balls or weave too many plot strands and that makes it tough to finish a story. I have been waiting for Kevin and Helen to consumate their love. Their encounter...ummm lacked something, I know it must a tough balance between 2 Het people "making love" and the voracious explosive high energy libido of a futa/norm fucking. So I'm glad, at least that you "allowed them their calm in the storm.

Just saying (verbosely) that the Union between Helen and Kevin could have been better & longer. Also PLEASE start tying up some plot lines.

The moment when Kevin's dam broke was the most beautiful thing I have ever read. And I have read a lot!

The sex was also great^^

As the title says just started reading this and BAM! I'm at chapther 9 it's a AMAZING story LOVE IT!

YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES!

I was rooting for this moment for soooooo long!

This is incredible. I love the story so much. So much...

No offence, But I hate you. LOL Now I have to read all you chapters to see if it's a happy ending, even for Diana. OMG I cried when Kevin told Helen he loved her. This is like a great book you just can't put down.. Please Please write another story like this one. I'll be up all night reading the rest of the chapters.

FINALLY!!!

Finally, finally, finally! God I hope they can be happy together....favorite chapter so far! Five stars!

Yikes - I feel like a parrot right now.

After the last chapter I called you an evil person for keeping me reading so late at night and did so without checking earlier comments. Now that I've done so I discover that my comment is something akin to an echo - so I apologise for using such a hackneyed phrase. Just shows how your stroy is affecting so many of us!

But what else can I say? Here I am again - reading past midnight again and the damn alarm will go off at 6 as usual tomorrow. How am I to get enough sleep - damn, I'm so busy reading Family Issues that I haven't even thought to jack off - so I'm behind on that too.

But a more serious thought has arisen - where the hell is this wonderful world full of futanaris? I need to know because I want to be there; to be part of it right now. Your story is so strong, so impelling, so real that my mind is there but sadly for me my body isn't. Oh well, thank you anyway for showing me some incredible glimpses of that completely desirable world - oh, and thanks for bringing Kevin and Helen together at last. But now you've dug quite a deep hole to get them both out of, haven't you? The next chapter should be (probably is) popping!

YES! FINALLY! I've been waiting for so long for this moment and it was sooooooo worth the wait. God the declaration of love from the both of them made me giddy! I'm so happy for these two characters it's not even funny. Your storytelling is so good that I usually skip the sex scenes to get back to the plot, but not this time! I was so here for these two finally sealing their love in the biblical sense.

Yes! *fistpumps*

I dropped this story when you was first making it cause it was taking to long but I'm glad I finally came back to it!

Glad Diana is out of pic for a bit, can’t stand her

You have to write for a living to be this talented

Another amazing chapter with references to real literature works that connect to the themes of the moment? I'm floored

I first clicked on this story because it had the rare male on futa tag. I was a little frustrated by chapter after chapter of it not happening, but in the end, was. It. Worth. It! It's such poetic justice that Helen could be his first that way. I'm so glad the wine was left to mature like that.

I used to think Kevin seemed a little too perfect and goody-two-shoes. This chapter really flipped that on its head, and goes to show that deep down everyone truly IS broken, and everyone truly IS a hypocrite, and it works so well. I only have two gripes, and one is more of a personal thing. The first is that Helen really should be feeling a lot shittier about putting him in this situation in the first place. Their relationship is beautiful, but I still feel she hasn't quite made up for being the catalyst to this entire shitstorm because she judged him before getting to know him. But maybe that's still to come. The second, more personal thing is the heavy involvement of religious stuff. It isn't a true criticism though, because it doesn't detract from the story at all. It fits the themes, and really does nothing but enhance the narrative. I just wish it all weren't so... accurate. As a person of faith, myself, (I mentioned everyone's a hypocrite, right?) it dulls my enjoyment precisely because it highlights the part that I hate of a thing that I love. I wish the story could exist complete without me feeling attacked in some way, but I wouldn't ask for it to change either.

And honestly, who am I to criticize? This story is seriously a masterwork. Words can't do it justice. I thought I wrote well, but I don't hold a candle to this. A real literary masterpiece. I think the other comments sum it up pretty well. I can't put this story down. Unfortunately I have to, as I have class tomorrow. But you can bet I'm going to be reading it IN class.

Totally agree with the last anonymous guy, the "hypocrite" one. We've reached the peak. Now, all that's left is to deal with the monster of the mountain, and let all said and done.

This

I have been reading your story line over the last few days and have been giving you five stars each time. This part was so good I wish I could give you a few extra stars in addition to the five that they allow.

Sometimes while reading the story I wished that Kevin would just keep his mouth shut instead of giving people his pointed comments and observations. But then this is Kevin we are talking about and not one of those pretty Lace boys. Plus it is part of the fun of his character.

I am sure there is more I want to say about the story, but I think I will wait to do that. Plus it is nearly 4am as I am writing this and should get some sleep.

Thank you for the story so far.

10 Plus finally Kevin and Helen

Yes! Finally, Kevin and Helen! Wohoooooooooo

The tension was beautiful

Perfection!