All Comments on 'Family Issues Ch. 13'

Loved this story and will read it many times. Thank you for the happy ending.😁

Honestly one of the best romance/drama novella I’ve read - certainly the best on literotica. Looking forward to further works.

I've read this story from start to finish. It is NOT total crap as someone has written. It was a good read, somewhere in the middle I did start to wonder if it was ever going to end, but it has with a lovely ending. Well done and thanks.

... It had to end but I'm happy it did as it did. Great story telling and very good writing. I'm looking forward to your future works. You certainly have a gift and maybe one day you can write professionally. I know I would read it.

I absolutely loved this whole story. Congrats on finishing it. I especially loved the epilogue with its light hearted ambiance it really let you feel the love. My one caveat is that i wish we got to see the c9versation between kev and helen about kevins father. I think that could a been a really cool emotional scene. Any way hope yo read some of your new stories ssoooooon!!!!

I’ve lived this story from the first chapter and always waited with patience (ok not so much lol) for the next chapter. Loved the ending but also sad that it’s now finished. Wish you well for the future.

YYYYEEEEESSSSSSSS!

Few have ever written a better story that was hot and compelling like this, can't wait to see what you'll write next.

I’m never reading another author from this site for a while. Wow this was such a rollercoaster of a story. 9/10

Can't wait for the next Story

Love the romance & plot twists

I wish they got the chance to talk about their real first meeting in the restaurant and how their families are deeper connected than they would have thought.

The skill you showed in writing this fantastic story shone through brilliantly . I read this from start to finish and always got excited when I'd see another chapter. Cant wait to see what else you do and i think you should talk to some porn directors and see if you cant make some of your ideas come to life. Better then the porn scripts that are out now xD

to find out what happens to Nadine

Incredible story, well told.

with an awesome chapter! This story started out really good but I kind of didn't like it halfway through but I really liked the ending to this story! Thanks!

There were a couple of times where I couldn't picture a happy ending for them but you really pulled it off. Thank you. I look forward to your new stories.

I am glad I kept reading. One of best series on the site. Thanks!

Give us a spin-off that's just Diana torturing that poor agent!

Fucking fantastic series. Thank you for all the hard work, it reads brilliantly. Your work is far from amatuer and you should be proud.

Holy crap I don't know where to start , what began as hot domination wank material turned into a really excellent and gripping tale and I'm not ashamed to say the last few chapters made me tear up (okay I cried like a bitch) but the love aspect was so wonderful this series was just amazing a real gem on the site

A story I didnt read for the sex scenes but for the plot

Amazing series! Some of my favorite parts revolved around the futa sorority, maybe you could write a story or series that was centered in a college setting. Thanks!

Very, very, very good read. Really entertaining. A long wait ,but well worth it. Thanks again.

Ups, downs, side-to-sides, and I loved them all. My heart broke for Helen, and stitched right back up, and I felt every emotion you poured onto the page. I will continue to be an avid reader. Both for the fetishes, the incredibly well written sex, and the incredibly heartfelt story.

Thank you!

I honestly cannot tell you this enough. I was feeling down for a period of time, and during one of those nights I looked up some dickgirl on male stories. I read chapter two a year ago and just read the sex scenes. But I thought “why not what’s the worst that could happen” and decided to read chapter one. Boy am I glad I did, I came to stroke my meat but you ended up stroking my heart. This story lifted my spirits and just made me happy in general. You are an incredible writer and if you decide to make more stories you can be sure that I’ll be there to read them. Thank you again.

Loved this series and ending was almost perfect. Only thing i wish is that kevin and helen had somehow taken over care for Iman.

This was awesome and is by far my favorite story on this site. Buttt.... The chapter where you make a flashback to Kevin’s childhood and he meets Helen and Diana in his moms store was really pointless me. It was like when I’m watching a cool anime and a random filler episode pops up. I want to kiss the ground you walk on though for indulging in exposition that’s ISNT pointless. I love the way you introduce characters to the story and give a clear presentation of them, except for Diana. I really don’t like her, idk if you wrote her that way on purpose but I can’t see what purpose she serves the story beyond being a plot device or something, like she’s a main character but she doesn’t have any motivations. Or at least she had one then didn’t go anywhere with it. Like she begged Helen to not evict Kevin and force him to be her boyfriend when she commonly visits Nadine for prostitutes when she doesn’t even like Nadine???? Like Diana just provides the beginning of the rising action then makes things happen in the story all while staying this manipulative, cocky, abusive cunt that only takes pleasure in vices for no reason other than being bitter. Like she forces Kevin to boyfriend and then for whatever reason, she introduces Nadine to the story, Kevin and Helen have their interactions independent of Diana, diana hits Kevin, he runs away, side characters are introduced, Kevin goes back for Helen, the bond builds, he runs to Nadine then goes back to Helen. Diana has to go a party Kevin meets Nadine again, side characters are introduced, kevin comes back, Diana takes everyone on vacation then Helen and Kevin bond more, Diana then tries to come up with an attempt to keep Kevin away from Helen then fails to do soo????? Kevin and Helen fall in love, Nadine continued to attempt to stela the business. Diana fucks Kevin making Helen run away. :\ then Diana cheats on Kevin with a agent, LOSES a FIGHT to FUCKING KEVIN, and then the rest of the storybjust happens without her. Even Ginger has more motivation as a character than Diana. I like that the story ended in a happy way but why does Nadine all of a sudden lose her resolve to keep Kevin around? Like she does all this work to try to take Helen’s business and take Kevin, then just gives up even after seeing how happy he made her sister that she obviously cared for. I feel like it was really weird for you to build up Nadine as this twisted, heartless, drug pin-queen, sex trafficking mob boss that makes even the tallest and strongest futas shit themselves with just a look All to have her go and say “I would have given up everything for you.” Those two characters kinda just threw me for a loop. Other than that, I absolutely love the story, and can’t wait for you to write more. RECOMMENDATION FOR THE NEXT STORY: some Futa on femboy with male pregnancy really role reversal-ish. This story gets a 10/10 from me. (P.S. I almost cried during the first time Helen and Kevin had sex)

Love this story so damn much. You created the most perfect world of futas because it's actually realistic. It's not just a bunch of dominant overlords. Anyway, an idea I think could be cool is a guy and a futa are friends. Futa is a massive alcoholic, cynical as they come, and bitter. The guy has been friends with her since childhood but she's been closing him off entirely. Will he be able to reconnect?

Thank you so much for this story. One of the best on Literotica! As for suggestions for new story, i would really like to see a Role Reversal story with lots of strap-on action. You know, big strong confident amazon woman, and small, shy, sensitive virgin guy. Its a little different than a futa story, but still within the crossdress/trans genre.

You write the best flirty teasing I’ve ever read. A great story in all respects, and I can’t wait to see what you come up with next!

Wow, just wow.. The amount of dedidcation on this story is incredible. I remember just finding this story a while back and seeing the end result is crazy. You really are talented and your writing skills are superb.

I read it all the way thorough and best story hands down, thank you

Please write same type of sory next time.I was hooked to it.

I found your story a month or so ago and finished reading the first 12 chapters in a few days. It was like a constant page turner. I was eagerly waiting for the last chapter and you didn’t disappoint. Loved the entire series. The sex portions were incredible, but even more awesome was the story and the characters, Kevin’s sense of humor, the emotion throughout the story. Thank you for writing.

I've loved every bit of this story and eventually noticed I was skipping through the sex parts because the romance in it was so captivating. In regards to showing your worldview in the story I believe every author has that right of course. I'm center right and Christian so I'm sure in a debate we'd clash on a lot of issues. Sometimes it felt like you story was pointing an accusative finger at me even though I doubt that was ever your intention. Either way I've had a blast reading this and I'll be looking forward to your future stories.

The mark of a great story on this site is that you don't read it for the sex , the sex is a bonus - that really became the case throughout your story. I became incredibly invested and I appreciate the happy ending, even though real life isn't always happy endings. Looking forward to more from you.

A very good ending to a very good story even though it did lose its way for a couple of chapters. There were some things that weren’t necessary to the story but after it’s been published not worth doing anything about. But there were other things that I would have liked to have had expanded. But you can’t please everyone and perfection is a goal unattainable except by an idiot. Even my favourite mainstream authors don’t always please me but I keep purchasing their books.

I’d like to see your next work be in another category. I think that to do another futanari story as a follow up would be a mistake because the immediate inclination would be to compare it with this one.

Like listening to stories with a couple of old friends sorry ot has to end but i understand

That was one of the best stories I've ever read (and I've read a lot over nearly 60 years of reading). I read this in its entirety over about a week. The final chapter was the pefect wind-down, leaving me happy, rather than sad it had ended. The previous chapter was annoying, because it was so gripping, I couldn't put it down, but I didn't want to read it too fast as I didn't want it to end.

Congratulations on an awesome story, and thanks for writing it! Congratulations to your editors too, who did a bloody good job.

The best series I've read here excellent job!!!!

Started reading for the sex. Kept reading for the characters. I just had to find out how it was all going to end. Really liked it.

Phenomenal story. Cannot praise it enough. Author is amazing and so fucking talented.

I read a story so fine it brought me tears allayed some fearstook me on a journeythrough someones special years i lived and lusted through their earsthis story was toldwith a lustful cock of gold and her sweet lips did unfold as my tongue unrolled peace

I read as a hobby to not deal with the things around me but damn this had me the second I started please write more, and possibly longer stories

I am looking forward for the next story! Me and for sure more people.

As with most readers on here I was looking for a good sex story,,, something down and dirty... But early in to the story I just couldn't stop wondering how this would all play out in the end... I got hooked on the characters,,, I just had to find out what happened next... I laughed,,, I worried,,, I got angry,,, Hell I even got PISSED a few times... But through this rollercoaster ride through HELL I fell in love with Kevin and Helen... I think most of us would love to find a love like theirs... Thank you for the HUGE effort and amount of work you must have put in to writing this epic tale!!! I for one LOVED it!!! Looking forward to your next twisted tale of love....

Wow, just. . . wow. This is amazing.

Thank you, wonderful beautiful person. I hope you have the most blessed and favored of lives.

I started reading it for smut but found myself reading over the sex just to get back to the story. I want what Kevin has

I just read this story from start to finish. I wasn’t originally expecting a good story when I started, I was expecting yet another corny guts story where it’s sex every 3 seconds but this story really came out on top and blew away my expectations. I’m glad I stuck around and finished this story. Well done and I do hope to find more of your atories in the future :D

This has been said a lot but yeah, originally started to skeptically read it for the smut, at first slightly annoyed at the rate of the build up towards it but appreciating the crafty way it built a natural scenario for the sex, a scenario that actually made sense amongst all these other stories that tries to poorly just force two characters together towards a sex scene with heavy cliche. I honestly was not expecting to get invested into this story nor did I expect to actually end up learning some semi deep shit about myself thanks to this story, I have to say that I'm really sad that it's over, but I like it's conclusion, I especially enjoyed that decent sized epilogue

I could say a great deal about this story - characters, plot, wit and banter, hot sex.. all good, all truly appreciated. In short let me just say that your wonderfully written story connected with me on levels I didn’t even know I had. Well done.

This is by far the most enjoyable series I have read in a very long time. Recently discovered the first chapter and could not put it down. Absolutely loved this, thank you!

That’s for sure! Loved it, looking forward to a new one hopefully.

This was a stunning epic, the sex was hot but the storyline was just phenomenal. You have just ruined me for any other story. Both the plot, the pace and sex was incredible.

I just...wow. I've never read erotica like this before. You go beyond great sex scenes and deliver a story with a ton of heart. You're a genuinely talented writer, so please keep it up!

I found this story a year or so ago and read for a few minutes then stopped. The non con element didn't appeal.

Fast forward and I've read everything else so I came back to this story. Jesus, it's been hard reading. There's so many uncomfortable truths between this story and mine, it's been kinda like facing demons. At times I've hated it but I couldn't stop once of started.

I also found, after chapter 8, I was skipping must of the sex to get to the story.

The only other story that's been this good is Laska And Me by Bobanon on the TFT site, both stories are only spoilt by the fact I can't buy hard copies of them.

Please write more, after that roller coaster we deserve it.

That is one of the best stories out there, thank you for sharing it.

Also a shout out to your trusted minions.

It would have been nice to know if she ever told Kev about his real dad saveing her ass in prison and how he reacted, but this was a storie i had a hard time putting down for very long!

Well written and great character development. Sex and drama very skillfully woven together. Plot was intriguing and definitely kept your attention. Overall, really good read!

Why there is no orgy or gangbang? Why there is no sister fight in the end? I love ur writing skills, I read the whole thing in one go today, it's brilliant, I love Helen already lol but do answer my questions

Love the story think I shed a tear like really thank you for the ride!!!!

This is the best story I've read on this website and probably will always be. It finally persuaded me to get a literotica account. This story had me emotionally moved and then horny then upset because I genuinely cared about these characters. Please continue writing and I'll continue reading :)

Good

A Well written tale, loved the invention and progression of the main characters.

Some interesting plot twists, very colorful characters.

Bad

Violence. Too much Rape and non consentual ...well EVERYTHING!! It was very disturbing and jarred me from the story. Cognitive Dissonance?

Overuse of aome words and phrases. For God's sake get a fucking Thesaurus!!

Baby Milk - Ugh!!, "Being bred by her" WTF?, "Etched Deep Inside" -meh!, Everytime anyone had sex "Ropes of Cum" does EVERYBODY on Literotica use this damn phrase? There were more but you get the idea (I HOPE!)

ENJOYED THE STORY VERY MUCH (I skipped over a LOT of the sex scenes after a while!

It's been almost a year. Are you going to write another story?

When's the next story 😭 nothing compares to your work

Absolutely loved the stories and the characters within it😊

That story is masterfully crafted.

I opened so many loose ends in a very entertaing way. They feeled a bit like... not filler but but pieces to flesh out the characters. And then you took those ends and tied them together in the most interesting way possible.

Seriously, I read the whole in one go and... well, I missed a whole night because of it and the next one is almost beginning, but it was worth it.

It was an emotional rollercoaster and it was a great one. You sure know how to use Drama and when to reveal secrets at the right time.

The only thing that I think you could improve is the reaction in the dialogues. The were some scenes, where I "saw" the characters crying or screaming because of the dialogue but they did not react that way and seemed too calm. There was one scene where Kevin talked about the death of his mother and brother and in that scene it felt like he acted too calm.

There was a second scene where it feeled like he should have screamed his words, but sadly, I can't remember which scene it was because there were too much great scenes.

Speaking of dialogues, you write great ones!

I hope I will read a lot more stories from you.

Hm, one more thought:

I think the negative comments about what happens in the story are just there because you released the chapters over time. A great story like this makes you wanna read more. But please, keep that format^^

You left me wanting more the whole time and I didn’t want to put it down, I can’t wait to see what else you write, keep up the good work

I'm glad I found this story once complete. What a ride! Characters which you loved to hate, yet still had redeeming qualities. Characters you loved, who still had their demons and flaws.

Started reading this yesterday afternoon, and was disappointed that I had to sleep last night before finishing!

Yes, I feel like the prison scenes went a little overboard, but by and large; a very well balanced tale with plenty of twists and enough juicy, kinky sex to keep the reader enthralled.

My issue that I have for your story is that I became obsessed

and had to finish the whole thing before I could put it down.

Great story teller.

Thank you for your hard work.

I had fun on the Roller Coaster 😁

Well, I really hated the part where I couldn't find the next page because the story was over... Apart from that, I think you spun an excellent tale for us avid readers. Thank you so much for making that time worth our while, and I hope you had as good a time writing it as we had reading it.

This has to be some of the hottest erotica I've ever read. That would be enough to keep my interest but then you went and threw in a complete and well thought out story to go with it. This is absolutely my favorite story I've read on literotica. Thank you for sharing this amazing story.

"Don't. Fuck. With Aria!"

I believe you could write a bestseller, although you would have to tone down the sex. If you were to make the sex less graphic, you could get this published and a bunch of people would buy it. Its such an amazing story.

Please tell me I didn't just read an ending to this story that included Diana getting away scot-free. Please, please tell me that didn't just freaking happen!

Seriously, I gotta ask, what is wrong with you? Why are you spending like a page and a half on Mike and Ginger's relationship? Two characters who were barely in the story before now and who haven't mattered to the story at any point. Meanwhile, Diana, who was the first freaking character we met and who has been(or should have been) at the core of the story for the vast majority of it, is barely even seen. I don't give two shits about Mike and Ginger because you didn't want me to give two shits about them or else they would have been in the story more.

I was however heavily invested in seeing Diana go to prison; at the very least. Why? Because you very effectively made me hate her and believe that there would be some kind of resolution with her character. Forget about the payback for what she did to Kev; how about the fact that there is no final scene between her and Helen? Why would that be okay to you after all of this conflict between them? Remind me of the title of this story again? No resolution, no redemption, no revenge. Just...nothing. Never mind the fact that she was the main source of conflict for the first ten chapters. Never mind that she sold out her sister. Who cares? At least we know Mike and Ginger were able to work things out...yay. I can't help but think you wouldn't have had to shoehorn a second romance into the story if you had just focused on the one that mattered.

Because that more than anything is what killed this for me. What had been a frustrating distraction grew to take over the entire story. The 'syndicate' subplot was trouble right from the start. I constantly just wanted to get back to Kevin and Helen during any of those scenes. Or even scenes between Kevin and Diana. Just something that felt like it mattered. Then from about chapter eleven on there was no getting back. It was all just cliches and tropes yanked from bad movies. It seems silly now, but I can actually remember when this was an amazing story about two futa sisters who ended up wanting the same guy. Boy, I really liked that story.

I started reading Part 1 yesterday and it was an act of will not to keep reading then. I finished all the parts today, reading on my phone at work, because I had to. I just had to. It's a wonderful story and I've felt so much over the course of it. Thank you for writing this and sharing it.

Honestly this needs to be a movie. I red the story start to finish and it was nothing short of a Rollercoaster of emotions. You're such an amazing writer and I was actually kinda bummed when the story was over. But hell of a finish. In the epiloge I kept hearing the song "heroes" from David Bowie in my head and afterwards actually played it just to soak it in. Really epic, great job

Bring Helen and back some time!!

Thank you for a wonderful story. A bit long but so worth it. Thank you for a fantastic happy ending!

Thank you so nuch for writing this.

You could've gave nadine a happy ending.

It's been a few years bow since I read this and it never really left my head. It is one of the best stories I've read.

I really hope you will make something more of this. Maybe with other characters, maybe with some of the same. And I really want to see Diana get fucked...

In anyway, I hope there is something more to come.

Oh my freaking God!!! I couldn't put it down. I was captivated the entire 24 hrs it took me to read this, from start to finish. I just... I HAD TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!

There were no enormous plot holes or extreme grammatical errors to ruin the journey your story took me on. And a journey it was.

Very well rounded characters that even seemed to even evolve from their experiences within the story.

Not much "gratuitous" sex, but plenty of plot moving smut (some of it even the good and dirty taboo stuff).

Thank you for this masterpiece!

Magnificent. Truly Magnificent. I blitzed through this story in a day and I am supremely contented. I will wonder at Helen saying that it was his biological father who saved her from death. I will wonder if Diana will be able to actually grow up more.

This was a spectacular work and I am very grateful for the pleasure of reading this.

That was so worth the wait you had me nearly in tears with Helen in prison . Anyway thank you for a great story and for making it such a page turner ... xx

I Wounder if sex is really like that couldn't stop reading.

rarely put comments but this is the first time ive read something on here and cared about the characters and story and also enjoyed the porn

10/10 best thing ive ever read on here and shows erotic fiction can have a plot :)

Beautiful

This story was the first futa on male story I came across and I can’t stop revisiting it. It is so good. You give such good descriptions when it comes to the sex scenes and I honestly ended up caring more and more about the characters as time went on. It went from a quick nut story to a story filled with twists and turns with characters filled with nuance. If I had to pick my favourite character it would probably be Nadine. There is just something about her from your descriptions that make her so attractive. I’d be lying if I said I didn’t want Kevin to end up with her. Speaking of which I know it’s been a long time since you have written an erotic story but you could possibly do a scenario where Kevin ends up with Nadine or even better write some more stories. It would be a shame if a writer of your talent just vanished :)

Overall a great series. I loved the NCN involving Kevin and the various Futa that had him and the rough scenes with the Futa he willingly let himself be used by. They are great scenes and written very well descriptively.

That said, Kevin is an unrealistic personality. I know I'm saying this about a universe where Futa are real (and fuck i wish they really were), but no one is as optimistic or forgiving as Kevin. At times it even comes across as naive, in a bad, not believable, way.

I've read a few series that led up to a point similar to Chapter 9's ending. And they almost always took a turn for the worse, leaving the couple you were cheering for to be heartbroken and leaving the reader unhappy with the way everything concludes. I actually skipped Ch 10, 11, and 12 because of this. I went to the comments for each to find spoilers to see if I would even want to read them. And no, I did not want to. Even in this last chapter it sounds like the people who needed to face karmic justice did not.

I read the last page of this chapter. I'm glad Kevin and Helen finally are together and happy. But from the spoilers I see in the comments, I won't be reading 10-13. It will just sour the rest of the series for me.

Even though I won't be touching 10-13, I'm glad you wrote this series. 1-9, and the last page of 13, are some of the best chapters of a story I've read that aren't "officially" published works.

I’ve read 100’s of stories on here but this was hands down the best ever by a mile thanks

Fantastic story! I only have a couple criticisms, and they're niggly little things. Now if only we could get someone like Incase to illustrate it, that would be pretty much the hottest thing ever.

Nice ending, really loved the story. Can we get a one-shot of some alternate timelines pairing Kevin and Nadine, Kevin and Brigette and Kevin/William’s daughter? Those my three favourite characters behind Kevin and Helen.

Wow.

This is the best love story I have ever read here, the humour and personality of the characters are amazing. It could have been better if there is more sex scenes like group, gang bang something like that and would love to see Kevin with eastern beauty

Hall of Fame. I sincerely, sincerely hope this somehow becomes an animated story. I think it would make an excellent graphic novel. Excellent job, no complaints worth this space and time. Can't wait to see your next work!!

I cried so much while reading this story. Usually for this reason I avoid such genre, but I thought I would just mas****ate to some pornographic text, and it turned out that this is real art. It encourages to be kinder to people. I wish everyone well

I super agree with the comment that wanted an alternate timeline with pairings of Kevin and Nadine, Kevin and Bridgette and Kevin and Williams daughter. There is so much potential in this story. This is the best futa on male story on the website. I hope you consider this as an option

Ok, good story but gay men or transgenders are not any less or more prone to violence then anyone else, and when a gay man murders another those are some of the most brutal murder scenes. Not a psychologist, don’t know the whys of it but you choose to the research check same sex murders in San Francisco. Get copies of the reports. I’m bi myself, but this current social justice trend where certain things are downplayed serves no one. Whatever your sexual orientation humans are still, at our core, predators.

Great series. Thank you for taking the time and creativity to wrote them