All Comments on 'Family Love Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Good story but...

I'm confused at where the incest/taboo came in at.

msboy8msboy8about 19 years ago
Good First Story

Was the "Taboo" part of that the sex in front of the neighbors? Can't wait for the sequel.

GirlWatchinGirlWatchinabout 19 years ago
Loved the story

Not to sure where the incest/taboo came into it, but certainly was a very good story. Hope you're going to do a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Family Love Ch.01

I've just read Part 1 and I can see the progression towards the incest content of the story.

Excellent stuff. I especially like the raunchy obscenities by the otherwise sophisticated women and the details of their underwear.

I look fwd to Parts 2 and more.

Would the author consider introducing sexy Grandmothers (60-65) to future stories?

NaborladyNaborladyabout 17 years ago
The Taboo is definitely there...

I've just read chapter 1, and I think I've found the hint of Taboo that the other commenters missed:

"Sue smiled and said; 'We were on holiday with some friends of OUR parents, they had a cabin out by a lake and had invited us to go them with them for a weekend. The cabin only had one bedroom and on the second day a water pipe burst and flooded it. We decided that all of us would sleep in the main room' ". The CAPITALIZATION was added by me.

goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
great tease

i liked the scene - you have to parents "opening up" about sex. i like where i think this is headed

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