by LibbyRocker
Wowwww…. What a hot, hot story. I really enjoyed your choice of words and your plot. Please continue with more stories, of mom, dad and daughter. Thanks
"Part 1 "
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No part or chapter # in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story BEFORE opening it always earns an automatic rating of 1.
Great start! I love how you created your own off-kilter, sexy world. Keep up the good work! I would suggest making one more proofreading pass or two, or search for an editor. Would love to see a mother/daughter/father threeway, but it's your story, and I'm sure it'll be enjoyable!
More parents need to perform this ritual . It just might light a conflagration in more young women. More please, and soon.
This was seriously a really great start for a first-time author. You told the story pretty well and it sounded plausible. some parents really do things like this, you just have to trust me on that one. anyway, I like how your mother helped you to prep your pussy, but it would have also been nice if you had just left yourself womanly full bush hairy for dad and not trimmed. I asked my daughter to leave it hairy for me the first few times we had sex so I could eat my own cum back out of it. It's so pretty to see your own thick cum running out of a really hairy pussy, just before you eat her to a squirting orgasm. While I am being honest, and feeling horny, I will go ahead and tell readers that I eat her brothers cum a few times from her pussy too. he is a year older than she is and her birthday was a weekend treat at a rented cabin. OMG how she ate her mom's pussy, her super-hairy pussy once she got the taste of - taste for pussy, in her mouth. Now we just fuck at home whenever we want. No need to rent some place special. Family sex is just what it is and what it is, is delicious every single time. You should see my son (thick cock) eat his mom's pussy for her! I also really like how you also included the daughter's feet in this story. There is nothing like sexy pair feet and pretty suckable toes to make an incest story even better. Keep at this, your doing great and don't get discouraged if others comment negatively, it only means they want you to do beter and you will, you definitely will. I can tell ---- you absolutely (sexy feet, sexy toes, white panties too small, to show it off) have well thought out in advance TALENT!
Sooo 🔥🔥🔥 damm mom said ur being such a good girl for daddy omfg nice second part u take take of daddy while I take care of u sososohot I hope there more to cumm very good detail give a very image in my mind that really makes the story I think not to much just enough also not super long 5 ⭐ thxs
I must say that I can't finish this story. There is too much phantasy and too less reality - and for me too much nonsense. So no rating from me.
Love it, it's very cute but hot at the same time. Can't wait to see how it develops. I see a family orgy in the future. Please don't forget to include her friends.
Great start. Often seduction is part of the appeal but a situation where there is training and preparation and both parents chipping in is great too. a dream cum true as it were. thanks!
Very cute, sweet, sexy, love the futuristic vibe. Can't wait to read what happens next. 5/5* Fav
I just cum so much. Best start since a long time. It can only get better as we follow the story..YESS get more peo involved. So Good