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The look on Mom's face was priceless. I could see a little fear and a lot of lust. The roles had been reversed and for the first time in her life, Mom was the submissive. I could see that she was enjoying the hell out of it. A lot had happened in a short time. We would see if any of it was sustainable.
The family counseling sessions that followed made the career of our psychiatrist. I know that she wrote several books that received critical acclaim. I read them and for the most part they were accurate. She was plugging the latest book but refused to say when it would be published. She didn't know what the ending would be yet.
I modified my original plan. When fall came and I went to college, my sister went with me. The school allowed us to live in an apartment rather than a dorm because we were family. It was a two-bedroom affair for the purposes of social acceptance. Susan rarely slept in her own bed. As much as I loved her, I wanted that to change. She needed her own life.
A few months later there was a knock at the door. I opened it to see a nicely dressed guy standing there. Susan entered the room dressed to the nines, walked over to the guy, and gave him a hug. She turned to me afterward, "This is John. We met in class and we're going on a date!"
I was thrilled for her. I walked over and shook John's hand. Feeling a bit mischievous I told him, "Yes, she's beautiful, but she can also be a real bitch. My one piece of advice is, don't let her."
As they walked out the door my sister winked at me and grinned. It turns out that she tried, and he wouldn't let her. They got married two years later.
I ended up marrying that apologetic schoolteacher. Yes, Maria is five years older than me and no, it doesn't matter to either of us. We have a well-balanced marriage. Sometimes I'm in charge, and sometimes she is. We make a good team.
Mom and dad continue to go to the psychiatrist. It is difficult to overcome years of craziness, but they are trying. Their grandkids have no clue how crazy their grandparents once were. Mom and Dad will always carry the guilt over what they did and that's fine. At least now, they can move forward as acceptable human beings.
Now, if I can just spend some quality time with my aunt...
- COMMENTS
Smellerabout 1 year agoJust in a week they changed their whole personalities. I get that most incest stories here stretch the truth quite a bit but this was ridiculous. I enjoyed the writing but the story was bs.
Anonymousover 1 year agoWritten by someone who has no idea what they are talking about. The author doesn't know post-puberty boys are stronger than girls. The author doesn't know teachers are mandatory reporters for child abuse. The author doesn't know teenage boys are famous for stuffing their faces with any food available in the house. This author has no idea that I beat crap out of my older sister when I was twelve. This author has no idea that seventeen year old boys can beat their dad almost to death, run away and join the military to avoid arrest - not me, my uncle. This author has no idea what real abuse looks like, has no idea how a teenage boy can easily turn the tables on his abusers. This author wrote a stupid, crap story completely devoid of reality.
MaximusTheMadover 1 year agoThe story had potential but I agree with the other comments about it being rushed and not making sense. It was way too complicated to be this short. Still the writing wasn't bad and I hope you continue because you're good enough to write something amazing.
OverconfidentSarcasmalmost 2 years agoI'm sorry, mate, but this was not good. It was really well written and easy to read, but the content was just superficial at best. It's like you somehow lost the plot halfway through... It would've made sense (and be easier) to create a simple revenge-plot by letting your MC break and fuck them into submission. I actually liked the twist of NOT doing that, and trying to turn them around and make them redeem themselves instead. But you skimmed right over all that, rushed to the ending, and nothing made sense.
You can't spent almost the entire first page telling us about all this most horrendous and atrocious shit they did to your MC over DECADES, like it's the most normal thing for them, and then solve it by fingering them to a few orgasms, like that would somehow cause them to rethink their entire lifes and worldviews! At least make the sex more descriptive instead of just telling us that they had sex for a few days.
And why does this have the BDSM-Tag, if nothing even remotely like that was in your story?
Fuzzy_Kbearalmost 2 years agoThe writing was done well, but the story fell flat. It was too rushed. Felt like I was reading the 'cliff-notes' to a novel. Even the 'sexy' parts were so short on description that this can't be classified as a short fapping story. I would suggest you read stories like soul78's "a family destroyed" to see how your story should have gone then try it again. Thanks for Sharing, anyway.
