All Comments on 'Family Matters Ch. 08'

by dezurtdawg

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Firmhands5Firmhands5almost 6 years ago
What a scorching fantasy

dd,

One may always dream and you certainly put the 'tale' together to satisfy that urge!

I realize you have to divide your time, but thankfully you do give we readers some with your tales!

Thank you so much.

dikupinyadikupinyaover 5 years ago
harem 2

i cant wait for the next saga

DarkmantimDarkmantimabout 5 years ago
Great story

You have written a great story I can't wait to read your next installment and I am very glad to hear that you're doing better

Hellbreaker298Hellbreaker298almost 5 years ago
Great series

Superb story. Hope you write the second part of the harem series with all of his daughters. But don't include the son at all. Have him go abroad and get settled there with his own family. Not as a part of the harem family. It would be good if the father impregnates all of his daughters too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Best story

That was the best set of stories I have read on here in years.

Thank you

TorCfreak13TorCfreak13about 4 years ago
Excellent

One of the best series ever well worth the 8 chapters

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I loved the series 💞 please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Harem2

When can I expect to read the harem 2 series?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Omg absolutely the best, the series just got hotter and fucking hotter. More and more like this please and soon. I can not stop fucking my brains out almost every day. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s U.K.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

So when do you intend to post the rest of the saga "harem 2". I am looking forward the expansion of the harem. His children giving him children. How many generations could that work?

P_DoggP_Doggover 2 years ago

Gary's only son, the next family stallion??

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Immensely enjoyed from beginning to end. Anyone who could criticize any aspect completely misses the purpose of Literotica and the goal of most of the authors (of which DEZURTDAWG IS ONE OF THE BEST). It takes a special kind of stupidity and false pride to criticize the efforts of these writers.

ker63469ker63469over 2 years ago

Love it immensely. Will you be adding to the storyline? Harem 2? Please say yes

JohnnyGaltJohnnyGaltover 2 years ago

Not bad, all in all

You really do need to classify this as Fantasy

Aside from his dimensions, and impossible stamina, Giant Cock boy once again fucks an unprepared ass with only soap for lube

With no tearing or bleeding

MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASabout 2 years ago

I enjoyed this saga quite a bit, you wrote well and completely. Gary NEVER turned into an insensitive ASSHOLE, demanding anything, he just let his "forward momentum" lead him to an extended family and great ending to the story...

Now, I ask the same question as others have...¿When do we get to see the follow-up?

josenussbaumjosenussbaumabout 2 years ago

This series started of quite nicely with 5*. The more Gary raises to semi-god status the less I liked it, and the series gradually went down to 3*, also because it became a succession of unrealistic sex exploits.

However there are 2 things I absolutely hate: non-consent and cheating. So, since Gary and Mindy/Vicky are cheating on Randy/Charly only 1* remains. (can't give 0*:)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

More from this series please or a off branch where his son becomes a stallion as well

MorbidromanticMorbidromanticalmost 2 years ago

I'm glad for the numerous readers that enjoyed the story till the end, unfortunately, I'm not one of them. I enjoyed it fully and was giving 5 stars till the introduction of Charlie and Randy, then the magic was broken and the story stopped working for me and I stopped enjoying the it. I'm a fan of pure harem stories, that is, those with only one guy. I thank the author for the chapters I liked. It's only my opinion.

hellhale01hellhale01over 1 year ago

5 Stars for every single part of this series.

I absolutely loved the ending with him having children with most of his relatives.

I will definitely be reading this series again

CaptainFrostBiteCaptainFrostBiteover 1 year ago

A hot, quality story. A rarity these days, well done and thank you!

BassNutt51BassNutt51over 1 year ago

Family does matter, and what a way to keep them all happy. Great story and you still left the usual opening if you decide to embelish the series. Thanks again for writing it's much appreciated 😊 o

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

LOVED it! So silly, but so much fun, for the protagonists and their audience!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great Story!! Continue with several more parts starting with his marriage and encounters with the other gals as they get pregnant. How about Vicky, Ronnie, and his mom getting pregnant too!!

Then of course, you could carry on with Harem 2 and bring in a long lost photo with others within the family trees. Would that be Harem 3?

Mayan1Mayan111 months ago

This story should be done in a movie form. I can't wait for the next sequel to this great story. By the way, this is my second time reading this story. Loved the first go around. Stay safe, stay hydrated, stay cool and stay blessed.

jesse13691959jesse136919598 months ago

Fantastic loved it all

Bulldogz1973Bulldogz19738 months ago

when is the next part of this great story coming

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

And awesome tale of an awesome family. It may be wrong, but it sure looks like it was right as far as the story was concerned.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

More, please? Harem-2? All together?

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

So, is there going to be the rest of the story? You used the title harem-2. After all Gary has six or eight daughters to breed. I am so looking forward to the continuation of the family. Please!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Nice one! Interested in a sequel 👍

tsgtcapttsgtcapt6 months ago

Great conclusion - almost. Yeah, another chapter.... thank you I

oksideshow859419oksideshow8594195 months ago

Great series and the ending was a Goldie Locks fairytale keep up the gggrrreeeaaattt works

🙉🙊🙈💨🤢🤮

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Shouldn't have jumped ahead and ended it. You should have left it open...good story

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