All Comments on 'Family Matters Ch. 08'

Shouldn't have jumped ahead and ended it. You should have left it open...good story

Great series and the ending was a Goldie Locks fairytale keep up the gggrrreeeaaattt works

🙉🙊🙈💨🤢🤮

Great conclusion - almost. Yeah, another chapter.... thank you I

Nice one! Interested in a sequel 👍

So, is there going to be the rest of the story? You used the title harem-2. After all Gary has six or eight daughters to breed. I am so looking forward to the continuation of the family. Please!

More, please? Harem-2? All together?

And awesome tale of an awesome family. It may be wrong, but it sure looks like it was right as far as the story was concerned.

when is the next part of this great story coming

Fantastic loved it all

This story should be done in a movie form. I can't wait for the next sequel to this great story. By the way, this is my second time reading this story. Loved the first go around. Stay safe, stay hydrated, stay cool and stay blessed.

Great Story!! Continue with several more parts starting with his marriage and encounters with the other gals as they get pregnant. How about Vicky, Ronnie, and his mom getting pregnant too!!

Then of course, you could carry on with Harem 2 and bring in a long lost photo with others within the family trees. Would that be Harem 3?

LOVED it! So silly, but so much fun, for the protagonists and their audience!

Family does matter, and what a way to keep them all happy. Great story and you still left the usual opening if you decide to embelish the series. Thanks again for writing it's much appreciated 😊 o

A hot, quality story. A rarity these days, well done and thank you!

5 Stars for every single part of this series.

I absolutely loved the ending with him having children with most of his relatives.

I will definitely be reading this series again

I'm glad for the numerous readers that enjoyed the story till the end, unfortunately, I'm not one of them. I enjoyed it fully and was giving 5 stars till the introduction of Charlie and Randy, then the magic was broken and the story stopped working for me and I stopped enjoying the it. I'm a fan of pure harem stories, that is, those with only one guy. I thank the author for the chapters I liked. It's only my opinion.

More from this series please or a off branch where his son becomes a stallion as well

This series started of quite nicely with 5*. The more Gary raises to semi-god status the less I liked it, and the series gradually went down to 3*, also because it became a succession of unrealistic sex exploits.

However there are 2 things I absolutely hate: non-consent and cheating. So, since Gary and Mindy/Vicky are cheating on Randy/Charly only 1* remains. (can't give 0*:)

I enjoyed this saga quite a bit, you wrote well and completely. Gary NEVER turned into an insensitive ASSHOLE, demanding anything, he just let his "forward momentum" lead him to an extended family and great ending to the story...

Now, I ask the same question as others have...¿When do we get to see the follow-up?

Not bad, all in all

You really do need to classify this as Fantasy

Aside from his dimensions, and impossible stamina, Giant Cock boy once again fucks an unprepared ass with only soap for lube

With no tearing or bleeding

Love it immensely. Will you be adding to the storyline? Harem 2? Please say yes

Immensely enjoyed from beginning to end. Anyone who could criticize any aspect completely misses the purpose of Literotica and the goal of most of the authors (of which DEZURTDAWG IS ONE OF THE BEST). It takes a special kind of stupidity and false pride to criticize the efforts of these writers.

Gary's only son, the next family stallion??

So when do you intend to post the rest of the saga "harem 2". I am looking forward the expansion of the harem. His children giving him children. How many generations could that work?

Omg absolutely the best, the series just got hotter and fucking hotter. More and more like this please and soon. I can not stop fucking my brains out almost every day. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s U.K.

When can I expect to read the harem 2 series?

I loved the series 💞 please continue

One of the best series ever well worth the 8 chapters

That was the best set of stories I have read on here in years.

Thank you

Superb story. Hope you write the second part of the harem series with all of his daughters. But don't include the son at all. Have him go abroad and get settled there with his own family. Not as a part of the harem family. It would be good if the father impregnates all of his daughters too.

You have written a great story I can't wait to read your next installment and I am very glad to hear that you're doing better

i cant wait for the next saga

dd,

One may always dream and you certainly put the 'tale' together to satisfy that urge!

I realize you have to divide your time, but thankfully you do give we readers some with your tales!

Thank you so much.

SO HAPPY FOR YOU CAN'T WAIT FOR YOU TO GET BACK ON YOUR STORIES. HOPE ALL IS WELL AND PRAYING YOU GET BETTER.

VERY glad to learn you are alive & WELL.

You have written some fantastic stories - certainly hope to learn that you have MORE to post sometime in the future ?

The Owners are probably very busy with all the NEW stuff on here since you were last 'Active' - just give them some time - they'll want you back just as much as your bunch of fans on here do !!

WELCOME BACK !!!

dezurtdawg here!

Hi guys n gals, just a quick note to let all of you know a few things.

First of all, I AM NOT DEAD........YET!

Besides my writer's block, my ticker started acting up a few years back and after way too many trips to the doctor they figured it out and prescribed meds to help with it. (My arteries are clean, just a non-correctable low expulsion factor. IF you know what that means you have my sympathy.) So I bounced from good days to bad days and the doctor helped to exacerbate that problem with constant changes to my meds. Shit!

Finally had a pacemaker implanted and, that, along with different meds seems to have stabilized things for me. So I've been slowly working on my long dormant stories. Unfortunately, while all of this went on I have forgotten my password to get onto my author's page to upload new stories that I have ready. Every time I ask for the reset password code it turns out that it won't work and thus far the help people here have been NO HELP!

So anyway, wish me luck at getting that fixed. I will try to add this note to all of my stories, or at least the last part for those that are series. Take care, all of you, and don't forget to vote!

dezurtdawg

There are two maternal grandmothers (Kim's and Gary's/Jen's), who never got their stallion. ;-)

Great series. Loved it just as much upon second reading.

I Loved this story!!! The whole thing was Incredible!!!! All of your writing is Sensational! Please write MORE!!!!! Thanks.

Would like to read more of this family. Perhaps a birthday treat, or one where the women share all the three men at the same time.

I enjoyed every word .In fact its one of the if not the best Adult lit stories I ever had the pleasure to read . The wife thought it was great to. I may not be the size of a cannon but I don't do to bad ,I think the only difference being is I a one woman man and my wife would kill before she shared me . Well written stories I think are easy to find but the story combined with your style rare as a family stallion .Consider us fans

D&J

Can't wait to read more along these lines keep it coming

when will harem 2 be coming:)

I am So looking forward to Harem-2, So when can we expect it being posted!

i just found this story did you write the next chapter?

When will Harem-2 come to the Printer. Loved the Story and the way he was able to Balance everything. You forgot to mention the Dad was he still around or Passed away.

That was awesome! More please

Hi. do you plan on doing a follow up story to this? focus around his Son taking over the rains ?

With as much pussy and ass and blowjobs that Gary is getting I am surprised he isn't walking funny! LOL

I loved this story it was one of the best I've read on this site easily in my top 5. I would however like to know if you plan to continue like it said in the story I'd be grateful if you would let me know.

Overall, a great series. A little tedious as all the fucking seemed pretty much the same. As other's have mentioned, it would have been interesting to see some of the women get it on with each other. After all, the guy's cock has to get some rest now and then.

This was one of the best series I have read on Literotica

Holy hell that was about the most erotic,exciting tale I've ever been riveted to!I'm still turned on days later thinking about it.bravo&cuddos dog

This iz a great story,can't wait for more

I'm curious, where in my story did I give a start date? Your comment shows that you put my story start date to at best coincide with the start of eBay. If your brain is happy with that go for it. But, what if MY start date was the DAY I started writing the story, which would put the ending date way out in the future, at least as of today? And that is why there is NO date in my story, because I don't know when a person will read it. Hell, if Literotica continues long enough your grandchildren might read it. Oh wait! I just made your start date (birthday) to be somewhere in the last 20-30 years. But you might be 95 years old with great grandchildren! See how easy it is to get caught up like that!

And just so you know, the ending of this chapter is set way out in the future!

Thanks for taking the time to comment.

dezurtdawg

First of all, thanks for having the balls to have a member name even though you don't post any stories of your own. The problem is, when I tried to respond directly to you I got the notice that you don't accept anonymous comments! WTF!! That is chicken shit in the first place; and in the second place my comment to you would not have been anonymous but under my author name and e-mail address! That means you don't want ANY comments back at you. Shame on you.

You said you were glad you skipped 87.5% of my story but still felt justified in giving it a single star, only because, I'm sure, they don't offer a zero. I don't care what your vote was, just the reasoning behind it. IF you had read the first 7 chapters you would have learned the background for the cuckolding and ecstatic adultery. I've reread this chapter and still don't know what you meant by "bliss-filled descriptions of humiliations" so I won't comment on that.

Most likely you will never see this, but it's the best I can do at letting you know that I read your comment and found errors in your logic.

Writer's block still hangs heavy over my head, thus this has taken a while to get a draft made to then paste into this form. So Anubelore, may you be blessed with smooth seas and gentle winds as you read stories more to your liking.

dezurtdawg

Fantasy is great but it still needs to be internally consistent,, The main character is now 40 so most of the story happened 20 years ago but eBay is a lot younger than 20 years old so Ronnie could not have become an eBay seller 20 years ago, just be a little bit careful, thanks for the story, Ed

I've waited a long time for more of your writings. I'd like to see and read more of your stories. Thank you for your stories.

Very well written. Please write more stories

Just straight awesome wish you would continue it. 5 star

Sorry, but cuckolding, ecstatic adultery, and bliss-filled descriptions of humiliations are not turn-ons of mine. Another crossover LW/incest-taboo tale...joy. I see many readers *do* have those fetishes. Good for them. Not my cuppa, but I stuck with it til the end (of this chapter. I didn't read the others, as I noted in my title) so as to be able to give an honest rating. I hated it, thus 1 star is my honest opinion. I'm commenting because I felt like making my perspective, as a "named" commenter, known. Fair winds and following seas to you.

-Anubelore

Well, DD you done good. The Stallion is the Alfa male but doesn't have to hurt anyone else by trying to prove it. Thats the way it should be. The one that can do it should help his loved ones without conditions and/or causing trouble between spouses. Everyone's life is better for him being there. If only people (in real life) would try to make life better for those around them sexually or non-sexually we would be in a greater society than we are already. You tell a good story. You make things happen perhaps a little too quickly and acceptance of the situation comes a little too easily by your female characters. But it is easy to see the necessity of that. You could easily have a full length novel if you slowed things down very much. The storyline is good even if the sex weren't emphasized as much as it is. Good Work. Hope you'r reading the comments as you've got some positive ones here and I'll add mine to that list.

Good story but I still say mom dear old aunty cuz and sis should get nocked up two.It's the code of the west pilgram.

very well written and damn I need to take a cold shower

Loved the whole story. Details were great and helped visualize where you were taking us. The only question I have to ask is: Anything new happening 40 years later???

I guess the lone ranger pleased everyone to there hearts content

good story hope you write a sequel

RON TEXAS cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

As others have said, this is one great story. I read all 8 chapters straight off, it is one of those stories you just couldn't put down and it's years since I read anything I couldn't put down. You really must write more, I don't care that much what you write, just do it - and don't take too long about it ! And don't make it a short story either, the more chapters/pages the better!

Maybe you could have a family orgy weekend with every girl in the extended family, maybe re-live Thanksgiving Weekend, or have a family holiday at some remote farmhouse; but please don't leave it here, it deserves more.

I gave it 5 stars, but it deserves many more than that.

Thanks again for a great read !

Please please please continue the family fun with the next generation! This series is smokin' hot!

This is without a doubt your best series, bar none. My only real disappointment I can voice with the story is that he didn't have children with the sexy 3 milfs Vicky, Sandy, and Ronnie. Still, this is one of the best series in the entire incest category of Literotica, and I hope you keep writing and come up with another. This story has inspired me to finally buckle down and write my own long-planned incest story.

I read it 1 through 8 and I loved almost every line . This is one of the happiest stories I have read on Lite . It contains so much love for family that I laughed , howled and I cried .

Thanks for a GREAT story needless to say all chapters got 5*****'s .

Thanks again

TX CRACKER

Very well done and written. We know in real life a young stud like Gary could never last that long. The size of his cock and the shape, I could only imaging. Since i am somewhat bisexual, I wouldn't mind having it in my mouth in the back of my throat having cum shot into me. Does sound good though. Congrats on the well written fantasy

Great bloody story desurtdawg, I loved all of it with only one complaint and that is I would have liked to have read that Gary had also got his mum Sandy and aunt Ronnie and mother in law also pregnant, maybe when you write more chapters in this series you could work them into the story with them also having four or so kids also and all of them at the stage where their "Stallion" dad gets to fuck the shit out of them and also get all his female Daughter pregnant. I would have liked to have seen a grandmother also involved into the story maybe you could belatedly add one or two of the grandmothers into your next chapter, here's hoping you take up my challenge to this thought of mine. So thanks again for a great story and waiting impatiently for the next chapter or so to appear.

Wonderful story. We really need to read about Rose though. And his only son, does he become the family's next generation 'stallion'? You should tell more about Kim's pregnancies. The picture I have in my mind of her is a 20yr old Nadia Komanich. Imaging her pregnant is wild. I realize this is all spawned by your incredibly fertile imagination and reality has no place here, but as with all well written stories I have become very attached to your characters. Its hard to see this ending when there is another generation who will be told the story of the family stallion, and will spend their lives searching for him. Rose is obviously already feeling the stir in her loins of the need for her stallion. Will he be her father or her brother. It seems significant that Gary has only the one son. It begs the question, is he destined for a special purpose?

outstanding writings and please start back writing.

Please, for the love of god, continue this story! It was, by far one of the best I've read on this site and I've been coming to literotica and asstr.org for about 15 years! I will even be your editor! Hell...you could even continue it on asstr.org so you can include ALL of the teen daughters. Please...continue this story. You're very talented in this style of writing, as I've really enjoyed your other stories as well!

Each page just bot better and better. I've read a number of your stories and liked them all, but this was the best so far. Do consider more chapters, fill in some of the gaps during the previous years, especially one of the birthday jamborees, they sound amazing. More details on how the various children came about, his relationship with each of the mothers concerned - as well as what happens in future years. All in all, a great story, but don't pass up the opportunity to continue. Thanks, you tell an awesome story !

I thoroughly enjoyed that story this is only the second time I have left comments, I have read for so long my eyes are bloodshot and blurry, so I hope I'm spelling everything correctly. Great story

Thank you for sharing this story, it was one of the best stories that I have read. I can not wait to read more of your stories, keep up the great work.

Very well written and very exciting. Would love to see more. Thank you.

Its like the old saying: Incest is best, the family that plays together - stays together. Such a wonderful story and a really loving family. I'd like to believe that this is all too far out to make up, that it simply has to be real, you can't write this because nobody has this much imagination. But I'm probably wrong. Anyway, full marks for a wonderful story well told.

I enjoy the story every time I read it. Please write a sequel to it!!!!!!!!!

Loved every depraved word. Can't wait for a follow up series.

"Deprived perversion at its worst.

This 'writer' is a sicko, should be locked-up in an asylum somewhere. "1*" !"

If you thought it was so sick, then why did you read the whole story, all 8 chapters?

The truly sick person is the one that can not tell the difference between fantasy and real life. This was a great story, just wish it had a sequel. Keep up the good work.

quite a turn on this family incest tale!! loved it,,,well written!

Great theme, expertly explored. thoroughly erotic and exciting narrative.this episode lives up to the expectations created by those preceding. Congratulations.

I have enjoyed your writings. Which isn't always the case with me... Your "fuck" scenes were a bit monotonous, every woman that Gary does has the same reactions and 'you were right's none of them professed that they knew they would have fun or could make him____... That almost was corrected when you had Mindy not wanting to curse but I was anticipating either her getting through without cursing or a bigger struggle and longer sex before she didn't realize what she was doing and blurted out some obscure profanity, then when she realized she had said it she let go and used profanities copiously. I did that the first time my husband got me to curse. For your next sequence in this story maybe you could have either Gary or his only son teach Randy's son what makes their cocks so unavoidable to their family we know the son will have the size because of Randy but you eluded to size not being that magic factor and it would be a good idea for one of Gary's daughters to absolutely refuse to do his son maybe for age maybe for relation maybe for size any way Randy's son is only related to three of the nine girls as their half brother. More girl on girl would be good and maybe more description from the ladies cumming. I am FEMALE and even though I enjoy reading exactly what Gary is feeling when he cums, I get off much better when I can imagine it happening to me, thus another reason they seemed a bit monotonous, not terribly so, especially since you changed the scene so much, but quite a bit of the wording was the same or similar. I enjoy your stories because they are often kinky and I can also imagine myself in the situations more easily than with many other authors.

That was a great story. I know that I couldn't cum so quickly after the first

I really enjoyed this please post more

this is the second time i read your stories. but it is the first i read it with my girlfriend. at the end you refer to more coming we can't wait to read that

I deliberately waited to comment on the story until I had read your Chapter 8. The reason? Simple. I had read this last year and wanted to know how it struck me after reading it again.

Same way. I found the basic story line to be new and refreshing and quite out of left field! (Um, that's a GOOD thing.) I found your characters quite well thought out and distinct. I liked them. Further, your descriptions of their individual reactions to "the Stallion" and the interactions of him with the other characters were quite accurately done and believable. Very well done!

You promised more. WHEN?

This is the second best story of yours that i have read. I just had to see what all the other people were complaining about. I just have to say that you are fucking awesome.

Your a awesome writer excellent story..........♥

im a new reader her an ur about the 3rd story i read the first to had me cum once but your story made me cum every time you fuckd Ronnie,Jessica,Sandy,Jen,Kim,Vicky,and then Mindy that was no words for it SEVEN TIMES HARD i fell like i gat the mystical stallion just by reading if only there was man like that for real sexy smart care and had a cock like that again no words LLLLLOOOOVVVVEEEDDDD IIIIIIITTTTT cant wait to read harem 2

Geez DEZERTDAWG , with your stories, I don't need Viagra! I am 71 and my cock was hard as when I was at 18 throughout all 8 chapters. . .got my old blood boiling. BTW, voted a 5 for all 8 chapters. Keep it up! (pun intended)

Amazingly written I really hope you write a new addition to this wonderful series and I'm really hoping to read more about Kim Jessica Jennie and there stallion Gary

Ok when do you think you will have the second volume out this was great. Want to read more.

I'm looking forward to your next series that involves the 'harem-2'!

You should follow-up on harem-2 The New Generation.

cannot wait for the next story harem 2

Though HE may only have one son, Randy and Mindy's son is also from the same gene pool and could also be a stallion.

THREE stallions in a small geograpical area? Just think of the mayhem that could cause.

Anyway Dawg, thank you for a fun read,

5*****

M51

this has become one of my favorite stories great content great ending and unlike some didnt spin out of control into turning everyone into sluts and whores.my other favorite wolud be my virgin sister/ with jack and lisa also ends well