by dezurtdawg
When will you write that Story so we can see where the Family goes from here.
As I began this saga I couldn't see how you could wrap it up; it seemed like a yarn that could go on and on but never find a natural stopping place. But you did it! You managed to corral this wild thing and get it tied into a neat package. Don't let yourself be misguided by your fans begging for more chapters; it's neat and complete as it is, and your efforts would be much better spent on the next story.
You did a great job on this story and I thank you for sharing it with us. May your future endeavors go as well!
I'll try to let you know how things work out with my 'harem-2'!
So when will you follow-up and let everyone know how things Developed between Dad and his Daughters or did his only son step up.
This is one of the best stories that I have read on Literotica in a long time. I have to agree with the comments before. There are to many possible ways to continue this not to. The son could be the next stallion in the family and help dear old dad out...
keep going and write a Family Matters 2.
im sure you will a lot of loyal readers (Myself included) waiting to read it.
I am sure that not just your readers, but your characters would like this to continue. There are some birthday celebrations that are opportunities for the next generation to participate in. There are at least three that are legal now and two more that will be soon, they may have their own Family Matter stories to share.
YOU HAVE TO DO FM2 THE HAREM WITH THE DAUGHTERS AND THE SON AND ONE OF THE DAUGHTERS SHOULD HAVE THE GIFT TO PUT GARY TO BED
Almost everything about this story is illegal, immoral, and unethical. A perfect trifecta for a dirty little story.
The only problem I had with it is the exclamations, such as "arrrrrrrrrrrrggggggggggghhhhhhhhhh." I think you could probably get your point across without so many redundant characters.
A minor point, really, because the rest of the story was mostly well written.
Cant wait for more. when and how is it going to trun out, one suggestion can v have a huge gang bang and some lady love to, a cluster fuck with both the families.... Lovely story couldnt stop reading it.
Started reading chapter 1 and couldn't quit until I got to the end of your series, Totally enjoyed every chapter, Thanks for your time and effort. It was FANTASTIC.
Started reading chapter 1 and couldn't quit until I got to the end of your series, Totally enjoyed every chapter, Thanks for your time and effort.
Great story! Loved it! I would also like to see more of this story.
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The only thing i can say is great story all the other have said the rest
DAMN !!.....just Damn !! HAHAHAHAHA
Loved it.
Thanks for a fantastic read.
(...what a dawg...) :-)
Totally hot from beginning to end. Can't wait for the "harem 2"
I never comment on a series until I finished it, as some start out great but end poorly. Yours was/is great all 8 parts! Thank you and please write more.
Thanks again, RG
i think this is a resounding please from others as well as my self. please add to this series. if i could add one thing, just bring out the lesbian experiences more. but truly a great read. ty
I hope you really mean that there is more yet to come. I can hardly wait for the second generation
Why not get these incestuous bitches dressed up for fucking? And maybe a baby in Mom and Sis's belly? That would heat things up even more!
I thought for sure that you would bring Charlie and Randy in with the girls. They were identified as Stallions to each wife and brought back to life to their wife after they were awaken by Gary. Why not share the girl since they were sharing Gary.
Enjoyed this series when it first got started, but its definitely gotten stale.
You are a talented writer, but need to show more variety. It really seemed to repeat over and over again.
Just the way you write these stories allows me to pu my self in Gary's place and feel all that he i sfeeling - LOVE IT!
You wrote another great chapter in the series. I hope you continue to write about the new group of women in the family. I enjoyed this series and I hope you write another one.