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All Comments on 'Family Olympics'

by FinJones

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Oh yes

Totally loved the slow build up and love the outline for chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Pretty hot, but...

A really difficult read. You need an editor pretty badly. The obvious grammar, spelling & sentence structure issues take what could e a 5 star down to a 3.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Ch. 2

More Aunt and Nephew then Jennie comes home and says what she was up to with Mike's mom and dad.

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