All Comments on 'Family Secrets - New Orleans Pt. 04'

For those wanting the second Tales of the Silver Wind, please visit my profile. The link at the very bottom is the one you want.

i was a little put off when he had to become a vampire but guest it had to be done. you also like to leave us with cliffhangers, why couldn't Charlotte use her powers what was stopping her and one last thing you better have him turn Kelly and Charlotte and then his mom when shes old enough. other than that great chapter loved it keep going.

also - "zombie laced bullets" i mad that's even a thing in this universe

Was that limbo or the zombie spell. Will his sister, aunt and his mom go with him for the gathering and what about the rest will they both became allies.

is it free, and will you post on here again.

It's a buck, and no I won't since it's published on another platform. And yes, zombie bulletso are a thing in this universe.

As for Charlotte not being able to use her powers, the zombie spell was blocking her. It wasn't limbo per say, it was more like being on the cusp of death's door why he could see the dead.

Can't wait for the next part, but it gives me something to look forward to!

Very good story, keep it going. What about the second chapter of Seperated At 10?

Then way keep the first three chapter's here if you're not going to add to it.

For the one that sent me the email if you read this The return of the gangbang queen is chapter 2, lit just didn't pair those two up, why, he'll if I know.

that's a good point TlB

There you go TLb it should be gone from this site soon.

now thats a cliffhanger

Do think sometime in the future you can post all the chapters of the sliver wind series.

Great story hope to be able to more very soon. Thanks for sharing your story.

Eagerly awaiting more

Loved the use of "Who wants to live forever" by queen. Exceptional series, and i hope for many more chapters.

I am so into this story as I was to the original one. I definitely hope you finish this one, you amaze me with your imagination and every story you write gets better and better.

I had never heard of this piece and was curious and looked it up. What a hauntingly beautiful work of music.

I know isn't it.

Amazingly done! Thank you!