All Comments on 'Fangs'

Hi all! This is my entry for the halloween contest, and I hope you enjoyed it! I was extremely busy for most of October and had to rush to get this entered on time, so I apologize for any grammatical/stylistic mistakes! :)

Would love a part 2 but great story!

Absolutely brilliant! Love this story.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

I really really liked this story... it was well written... and slightly humorous!

Terrific story, and your dialogue is fantastic. Really liked the play on the vampire tropes too. Great stuff!

Good story. Erotic and well written.

Great plot!!! Please go on...

Thanks

A fantastic story for Halloween! The dialog is excellent, and your descriptions are superb as well. Very much enjoyed this!

This was great! Would love to read more

Great plot idea, Pluna. I compared your Diagnostic Test story to Asimov---save for the sex, this one could easily have been written by someone like Robert Bloch. Lots of five-star fun!

I loved this so much! One of the best stories I've read, ever, period. :)