by Genderal
played with him and and let him go hard and learn nothing.the two women got what they wanted,left the boy hanging.didn't tell him shit about sex,just show him how women fuck.that what this story about what a woman wants.
LOL. I figured the boy would have enjoyed himself. I must be way off the mark, unfortunately I've already submitted the next chapter where he has an even worse time. I guess it will be the last. Still I'm giving myself top marks because I enjoyed writing it.
momma needs to get some of Robert and cure that itch of hers
i like it, keep doing this good a job and you got a fan for life lol.
Too similiar. May I suggest using names that are not similiar. The verbiage is good, the action hot.
Thanks Don
Sorry but I didn't see anyone called Ilene in this story, you meant Elaine which is very different from Irene.
Fab Story, good development.