All Comments on 'Fantasies Fulfilled Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
that was cruel to the boy

played with him and and let him go hard and learn nothing.the two women got what they wanted,left the boy hanging.didn't tell him shit about sex,just show him how women fuck.that what this story about what a woman wants.

GenderalGenderalover 17 years agoAuthor
Authors note

LOL. I figured the boy would have enjoyed himself. I must be way off the mark, unfortunately I've already submitted the next chapter where he has an even worse time. I guess it will be the last. Still I'm giving myself top marks because I enjoyed writing it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
give momma some

momma needs to get some of Robert and cure that itch of hers

PengoraPengoraover 11 years ago
Was really Good

i like it, keep doing this good a job and you got a fan for life lol.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Ilene and Irene

Too similiar. May I suggest using names that are not similiar. The verbiage is good, the action hot.

Thanks Don

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Who? - Previous comment

Sorry but I didn't see anyone called Ilene in this story, you meant Elaine which is very different from Irene.

Fab Story, good development.

rightbankrightbankalmost 9 years ago
I am struggling

trying to figure out who would have these fantasies.

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