All Comments on 'Fantasy Finally Becomes Reality'

I don't know what that other ahole's talking about... I thought your story was great and I haven't read any others like it. Thank you for sharing it with us!

The telling was a little bit ordinary and pedestrian, as the characters never really come alive, due in part to the "I'll tell you what she told me" convention you used. And the 5 step game took the spontaneity out of it. Still, pretty good. I'll check out some of your other stuff, based on this

What amazes me are the jerks that leave negative and rude comments. You'll notice they are all anonymous too - meaning are don't have the balls to let you know who they are. You would think if these 40-something, single, ugly looking, basement living with their mommy losers would try to find a way to get a girl rather than just writing their comments. By the way, great story. I look forward to reading your others.

Thanks for a hot and very sexy story!

Joe

Other than that it was a hot story. I'm not too sure about her offering her ass so easily - that just didn't ring quite as true as the rest of it.

My wife and I like to go out and shoot pool a lot. She loves to tease while doing it and it has led to some very sexy nights.

Whore makes husband's cuck fantasy come true.