by angelicsounds
I totally loved this line:
If only she were Terri. But, then again, if Terri did something like that, she would find herself on her back behind the counter about 5 seconds later.
I am loving this story and can't wait to finish all of your submissions.
I feel sort of weird about leaving feedback for a piece that's unfinished, but I thought I'd better since I'm here on literotica so rarely! Very nicely written - I like this girl a lot, she's got soul. He's lovely, too, and I especially liked the way he was so taken with Terri that he didn't even notice Holly's, um, assets. =) It's rare to find things in the interracial field that are written so tastefully, with such feeling. I'll definitely keep checking back for more from you. ~Rose
I hope that you continue this story. I really appreciate the way that there's been no sex yet. I think it's going be much better for the waiting. It seems to be a wonderful romance if Zack and Terri can be adults and not sexmaniacs who just do the do and have nothing substantial to fall back on.