Fantasy Pt. 08: Alice's Failure

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Henry went to sleep conflicted.

That ended their second day. The next day was Sunday when, about mid-day, Alice made a terrible mistake.

End of Part Eight

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

So strange [no not really] that the attention span of LW readers is so low. I wonder if the vast majority have ever read a book, more than 120 pages cover to cover. Five golden ones.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

If this serie keep going down so much in ratings, next parts will quickly reach the bottom at 1*. From the very negative numbers this tales are getting worse for every new part, now at a mere 2.6*. After 8 constantly descending parts, it's obvious that this plot need a good change in content and direction.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Could have skipped this chapter and not missed much. As always, Alice is a portrait of self destruction. The last sentence only solidifying the assertion. Henry could not be better named. He personifies the milk toast demeanor of a cliche 1940s movie character. I can almost hear him: "Se...see here n...n...now Richard! You...you're going t..t..to far! Taking lib...liberties with m...m...my wife!" And Richard, he will continue to be the predator that he is. Destroying lives and leaving tears in his wake. Someone should make him have a truly horrible accident.

26thNC26thNC8 months ago

Getting somewhere finally.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

If you are wise u will end this boring story soon there is only so long Alice can go without fucking Henery

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