by Whatthecuckk
This was a good, basic cuckold story but you need to work a little on your perspective. You switch several times from your primary third person perspective to first person. It's quite distracting when reading. Otherwise a good erotic story. Thank you for sharing it!
Wow, that made my little penis so stiff and I came so quick. It really rare for the Bull to allow the cuck to watch, only once for my Mistress and I.
That would be so awesome I love eating my cum out of my wife and would be my ultimate dream to eat another man's cum out of my wife. I would suck his balls while he is fucking my wife and clean his cock afterwards.
I appreciate all the feedback. This was my very first attempt at writing a story and I’m open to any critiques. Looking forward to providing more adventures for you all!
This story was one of the three POVs. Check out the wife’s POV, Finally Happening in my stories. As well as, Reignited Lust, the lovers POV. Thanks for reading!
I agree with pfeelthy that this was a good first effort, but I found it too distracting because of the numerous errors. Please keep writing, but also find an editor/proofreader to check your work. Thanks!
Loved it, I've gotten to clean up both of my ex's and current wife's cream pies. I especially loved cleaning up the anal cream pies for them. Sometimes my second wife would send me over to one of my old friends while she was with her guys. I couldn't go home until after a certain time and my friend loved to bend me over while I was talking to her. I miss the fun,
Great story and very well written! It brought back a lot of very pleasant memories of watching my wife's Bull pounding her pussy and having me clean her up afterwards!
CuckRick
I like how you’ve written this story from all 3 perspectives. I was a little surprised that she didn’t sit on your face as soon as her friend pulled out. I have looked up at my wife’s gaped pussy dripping cum as she hovered over my face. What a sight to behold!