All Comments on 'Fashion is Our Name Pt. 02'

You don't graduate from an English school - the results from public examinations, in this case A Levels, don't arrive until sometime in the middle of the summer holidays. Most students have conditional places at uni. so the second half of the summer holidays gets phrenetic as students and admissions staff try to sort the resulting mess out. Adrian clearly has a firm offer to Oxford - but actually the universities of Oxford and Cambridge uniquely don't manage admissions, the individual colleges do, so correctly, Adrian has a 'place' at <insert name of college here>.

This is one of those stories that requires the suspension of disbelief - hung virgin goes from nothing to sex god with three women in a week? I will keep reading and giving 5,s at least until I see how the story develops - it is well written - but next time you might develop it more slowly - more but shorter chapters.