All Comments on 'Fast Times At Eden S&M Ch. 01'

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Raven512Raven512about 2 years ago

I love all of your futa stories but the premise of this one sounds like it'll be my favorite. Can't wait to see more of this pairing.

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsabout 2 years ago

Great start! Love your writings!

nakedguyatxnakedguyatxabout 2 years ago

Long intro; little action. But it promises much for the sequels. Hope they turn out well.

BetaDickSlaveBetaDickSlaveabout 2 years ago

Awesome, looking forward to the next episode and Trevor's journey into sexual servitude!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Pros

I wish Eden S&M campus really existed.

The Dean part was ironic in a good way.

Cons

The beginning dragged on and almost lost interest.

Too many characters too soon and needed more development.

Considerate7Considerate78 months ago

Excellent concept and a great start.

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