All Comments on 'Fate's Crucible'

I can't wait for you to continue this. It's unfortunate you can't write as fast as I can read your work! I've sent you private feedback. I'm "gig..........@....com"

different from anything i've read on here so far and i to my surprised enjoyed it very much. i look forward to reading on if there will be another chapter, hopefully...like to see where this goes and ends. respectfully fan in Texas naynay