All Comments on 'Father Ted's Diary Ch. 01'

Interesting start looking forward to chapter 2, 5 Stars

Love the sex

Great start

Hot story

Great opening. Made me think of Father Ted, the English TV series. Great fun stories, and now for the behind the scenes stories.

Look forward to future events.

Great start, many escapades to come I hope

Keep on, I envy Ted, would love to entertain his women.

Hot story except for the slut mother. Slut Moms are never a turn on.

Size elements can be interesting. Ridiculous size elements are just that... ridiculous. And the moment this starts drifting toward a harem story, and chance of I/T heat to persist evaporates into nothing.

Very nice start. I can see many, many fun adventures in store for Father Ted !! Please continue !!!!

I liked the story, how ever the wording could be better. If this was the first draft, consider what it could be with a rewrite. Please for the next chapters, re read them several times to make it flow Better. Best of luck.