All Comments on 'Father's Lesson'

I'm sorry but you lost me in the first paragraph. Before you publish please run a spell checker over your work.

What a cum dumpster, and then the combination from hell, pairing her with an asshole father with no respect for his own son. Truly awful.

Rather tired story been done far better before

Needs more work. Sloppy and full of errors.

Unfortunately for me, I didn’t like this story. It lacks substance and it’s too rush. This constructive criticism!

It is so rushed and saying 'you haven't done this act'? Would not happen in an act of sex

WTH?