You have a great premise and characters are good too. My major problem is the story feel disjointed. You do a lot of time jumps and location jumps. There are some serious plot holes too.
28.03.2020 - Everyone be safe. The outbreak is scary. Lost my job :( Hope all of you are doing great, I wish you the best and I want you to relax and forget about the insanity of the outside. 10.04.2020. - How are you all? Are you keeping safe? Stay inside! I'm busy writin...