All Comments on 'Fay's Birthday Present'

for becoming pregnant where you are. "first impregnation of the evening." But most women in the US only get pregnant once every nine months.

Perhaps having a second person read over this before submission, whose primary language is English might prevent errors of this type.

I will leave for others comments on the rape of the wife and her future actions towards her soon to be former husband

and her possible STD infection.

Manshimajin, thanks for a great story - I can't believe 'Anonymous in the USA's' comments - no wonder they are losing the war in Iraq if that is an example of the USA mentality!

Your story is well written, incredibly erotic, your English is perfect and if Anonymous can't tell the difference between a literary allusion and day to day life that's his funeral. Perhaps he'd better learn to speak English before making comments in future. In the meantime keep writing for the rest of us and ignore his jealous comments - what has he contributed to the board?

Manshimajin, thanks for a great story - I can't believe 'Anonymous in the USA's' comments - no wonder they are losing the war in Iraq if that is an example of the USA mentality!

Your story is well written, incredibly erotic, your English is perfect and if Anonymous can't tell the difference between a literary allusion and day to day life that's his funeral. Perhaps he'd better learn to speak English before making comments in future. In the meantime keep writing for the rest of us and ignore his jealous comments - what has he contributed to the board?

Would love to have been at this party