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Click hereTerri started to come to Alan, but he put his arms out stopping her.
"Terri, you didn't even say it would be a one-time thing. I might understand an A-list actor or a football player like Tom Brady, but from what you said, you would be more than willing to do more. Where would it stop, A-list, B-list or how about a stand-in or a grip or the food server."
"Would you go after only the starters? How about the backups or the water boy. Where would it stop? Well, I'll never be famous, but everything I ever did, I kept you in mind when I worked towards my goals, our goals, to make you proud of me and make you glad I was your husband."
"How about the lead guitar player? How about a political leader? There are thousands of famous people. Where would you draw the line?"
"No, no, it would just be a one-time thing," Terri was pleading, "I mean never, I was confused." Never, I would never do it." Alan smiled and spoke softly, "I think your first answer was the right answer."
"No, no, I will never do it. Please Alan, please forgive me for even thinking something that stupid."
"By your own standards, I am a topline Alpha Male. I meet all the requirements of any woman, but I see now it will never be enough for you self-centered, spoiled millennial women. If I can't keep a woman satisfied and happy, what chance does the average guy have in today's society?"
"During our earlier conversation, you have convinced me there is no use in me or any man trying to have a relationship with a woman. They are just a waste of time."
"I have talked to every man that is married to one of the women in that group. The ones with no kids will be filing for divorce. The ones I feel sorry for are the men with children. They are stuck with the women they are married to, they are crushed about what their wives said. Especially the guy with the five year old. Mentally they will never recover."
"Terri, women, are far more likely to cheat when they are ovulating according to statistics, and to top it off, they will choose to forgo condoms to satisfy their biological urges. What if you meet Jacko then and get pregnant." Let's say a 3rd-child that is not mine. I would be stuck with you and another man's child."
"If I choose to leave, I will still be stuck with alimony child support and still lose half my stuff. And would my children only every other weekend. His child would take time away from mine."
Terri was, shaking her head, "I promise it will never happen." Alan was now sobbing with tears running down his face, "Yea, like, you said in our vows, you would forsake all others to death do us part. Even famous people."
"Terri, how would you feel if no matter what you do in your life, it will never be enough?"
"By your own words, I could never trust you again. Every time you go out of town, I would be imagining you meeting someone and going with them. You make me feel very inadequate as a man."
"So unless you can give me one good reason I should stay that you did not shoot down earlier, I will be leaving."
Terri was panicking at this point, trying to think of something.
"No, answer huh. Terry, I will love you to the day I die, but I can never stay married to you. As a matter of fact, I will never marry again. I was thinking, why would any man get married in today's society. It is just not worth the effort."
Alan stood up crying, he was hurting badly. He bent over at the waist grabbing his knees for support, trying to catch his breath. He screamed out, "Terri, it hurts so bad. How can my heart still beat when it is in this much pain?" Terri was sobbing so hard she started hiccupping, begging him to forgive her. She couldn't move from the pain she had caused.
Alan staggered trying to gain control of his reflexes. He fell against the wall, trying to steady himself. He reached for the suitcase. His hand shook so bad it took three times before he eventually found the handle. Terri sprawled out on the floor crying. When Alan reached the door he opened it. As he walked out, he turned and spoke, trying to catch his breath from crying, "Terry your forgiven." Then he closed the door behind him.
Author notes. I do have an ending but not sure if anybody would want read it. If enough request I will.
- COMMENTS
Chimo1961about 2 months agoI can feel the heat from that flamethrower.
5
Oh and you really ticked some folks off with this fiction.
Sorry folks, the women out there do not follow rules, and cheat like men do.
Anonymous2 months agoidiotic!
Without even reading further the stats are so false they are laughable.
As noted by other commenters non-paternity is way less than 1%. In Caucasian couples(99% of LW wives) is about 0.2%.
Also men are far more likely to divorce a cheating wives than the other way around.
When a wife cheats the likelihood of the couple to be married "till death do us part" is incredibly low. Some men would stay for the kids but at the end would leave.
Wargamer2 months agoSecond time around, this is quite clever. He has taken Anderson’s tale that he based his Feb sucks story on and used it to good effect in another story. Very clever indeed.
Rescored from 3/5 to 5/5
Farnorthman3 months agosomebody give that man a cement pill and tell him to f=harden the fuck up, the bitch is dumped now move on
Lanmandragon3 months agoThe MC seems a little stupid, whiny and overly dramatic. Just because one woman is possibly unreliable, it doesn’t seem to justify tarring all others with the same brush. The puritanical US background certainly seems to make life difficult at times. Thank goodness those people left on the Mayflower.
TrainerOfBimbos3 months agoSorry mate, but your statistics are bupkis. There's no way that infidelity statistics nor false paternity statistics are that high. The actual numbers of both are like 20% for men, 18% for women and in the case of paternity fraud it's about 1%. The 30% statistic you are quoting is from France and in the case where someone has gone to court to petition for a paternity check because they think they are not the father (as in, they have already a suspicion). The result of that is that about 70% of the men ARE the father even if they don't think they are. Just think about it for a minute - if that 30% statistic was true, the amount of genetic diseases that we would have in the general population would be fucking ASTRONOMICAL. Hell, there was a study done on a genetic disease where they DNA tested everyone who had that specific disease and their parents, literally thousands and thousands of people, and you know what they found? The rate of false paternity was LESS than 1%. I get that you're probably getting your statistics from the internet - blog posts, reddit posts, maybe article on websites, etc. But try looking at actual peer reviewed studies to get real information. As for the story, it was okay. 3/5, brought down by the bad statistics.
Anonymous4 months agoWOW! What a poignant and powerful and sad story. Well thought out And the dialogue was superb. This story deserves at the very least a 5 stars. Very well written.
Anonymous4 months agoLol the quoted statistics are simply false. Have an agenda? Wonder where the author got those "fake" stats. The Anonymous commenter from 3 months ago with the post "A tad overly dramatic" quoted far more accurate stats. Doesn't take genius to do research on the Internet people. Just take off the tinfoil hat first and have an open mind.
Anonymous4 months agoBest damb FS alt end ever! I love all the libtards yapping in comments, I think it hurt their feelings. It's hilarious how flipping situations around and women freak! Understand this all he did was flip the situation and it sends the women into diatribes, fems can't even deal with the situation just being reversed SOMETHING TO THINK ABOUT! MEN SUFFER 10 TIMES WORSE FROM INFIDELITY than women do! It's a fact because only men ever have to question if the child is theirs, women don't even comprehend the feelings involved.
Anonymous5 months agoBoth you and your editor need an editor. Your quotation marks were not used properly, it is "you're forgiven", not "your forgiven" and you left out words in many sentences.
I gave you a 4 for story, however you would get a 1 for grammar.
