by IWriteNSFW
But the sex was too quick. There needed to be descriptions of what the other couple was doing, what they said to each other, etc. There could have been a lot about her boobs being handled, licked, sucked, and perhaps being used for a titty fuck, how he reacted, how she reacted, etc.
Wasn't bad. Could have been a lot better.
Would have loved hearing about comic con costumes coming off to start the action. Fun romp!