All Comments on 'Feeling Spankish'

Liked the style, tone, and the internal dialogue was great. I felt it was a little short, though. Could have been more detailed. I, personally, am a big fan of spanking, and this got me quite wet (probably cause right now its 7 am and I'm watching TV too). Also, you might get comments on how the dialogue was odd (that you used a dash instead of quotes.) I know the French and some other Europeans do this, so if anyone bitches about it you might want to put a note at the start of your next story. Keep writing!

i can't wait for more

Thank you, I appreciate your feedback! Check out my other creations too :)

Awesome!