All Comments on 'Feldare Tales: High Society Ch. 01'

by mack_the_knife

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Once again...

... you can do no wrong!!!

Amazing, as ever.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great story

Could u pls continue this storyline :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Eloquent, well thought-out comment

MORE! OR ME MAKE HURTING!!

AnotherWannabeAnotherWannabeabout 10 years ago

This is a pretty well-written story, and I did enjoy the snappy dialogue and your digestible writing style, but I also wished the characters had more physical presence. I don't really get a good idea what any of them look like. Also, the story is a little aimless at this point.

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