by jjcolejr
you kind of gave the impression that the mom was fucking the husband ,but didnt exactly say it.then you stopped the story without the how everything worked out part.
where is the rest of the story, it feels unfinished.
Did you run out of time, the ending was rushed.
I think I disagree with the other comments. The way that you hint rather than outright state things in this story is very artful. And in my view, it ends at exactly the right place. In fact, I think this may be the most skilfully written tale in the whole series. It is certainly a very pleasant variation on the theme
This yarn told from a very different direction was very entertaining. I read it twice. Subtle, sad, amusing and very illuminating.
Thankyou.