All Comments on 'Felicity's Submission'

Another epic story of one of the best writer here. Love the creative ideas which the subject undergoes. Especially that her luck runs out so badly. The details and humiliation are another masterpiece. Love to read everyother story of this author.

I loved how you drew that out with the gradual, but not too long, decent into slutdom. I also really enjoy the wrap up to the story which was quite novel in itself and actually enhanced the story. I do think that this one needs a follow up to see how far it takes Felicity and what depths she plumbs. Great work!

Please, continue. With the final twist this story is begging to be continued.

Is she going to be the best boss ever? Maybe... Probably not. :) Even people so rational as this lady have their weak points, don't they? Still DARPA shouldn't do those things with their employees (or anybody else).

A bit different the style. I don't know if the easiest one for a writer, but it seems to work for you. Well done.

By the way, in 'Up the farce' I didn't think that you were intending to be offensive, I just pointed out a detail that sounded curious, but if you think that you should change the character's name may be a good idea.

-Onkana

I certainly hope to see more of this.

There were so many great things in here.

* The style was different, but it worked so well here

* You did her self-analysis so well

* I loved how she continued to take it further and further (in the name of science)

I felt the ending was the weakest part. It was hot, but not quite as good as the earlier parts.

Looking forward to reading your next story!

Incredibly inventive.