- BDSM
- Femdom Flatshare
- Page 2
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Click hereShe was incredibly wet when she sat down so I hoped even I would be able to give her a good time when she was that horny already. I mean it couldn't be that hard from this point on right?... Well I was wrong...
I tried really hard but it did not seem like she was getting closer to orgasm. Actually after a while it almost felt like she was bored. In the beginning she caressed my body and even paid attention to my abandoned cock but the longer it took me the rarer her touches became.
"Come on, you can do better than that...If you get me off I promise I will give you a real orgasm. I might even let you fuck me." she tried to motivate me. My cock twitched at the thought and I honestly tried to give it my all but apparently it was not enough. She was moaning only occasionally but she didn't gave me the possibility to explain myself. She got up a while later. "Well, we will work on that I guess." she sighed sounding genuinely disappointed.
I could hear her stand up and walk towards the door.
"Wait... Wait... I am sorry... I can do better I promise... you won't leave me here like that right?... You can't!" I pleaded. The only response I got was the sound of the door being shut after she walked out of my room...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoWith the blind fold I was half expecting her to be a shemale, but then this story wasn't in the transsexual category. Looking forward to future pages to the storyline. Has lots of potential, chastity, forced to wear panties, yada yada.
Tank4228almost 2 years agoNice story and seems a good start for a multi chapter storyline to take place now!
Failedscoutalmost 2 years agoThis was a very erotic story that should have been longer or at least promised another chapter.
Thank you for writing and posting here.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoGood premise.
But lacks details. Her jerking/playing with his cock was dar too straightforward. She was edging him, but there weren't enough slow, steo-by-step details of what she did to him.
And there was little dialog during the edging.
Needed to have her asking him if he liked it when she did this? And this? And this?
Needed to have her ask him if he liked it faster? Slower? Harder? Softer?
Needed her giving him instructions/directions about how to use his tongue on her pussy.
And did he like the way she smelled? Tasted?
Needed description of what her pussy was like. Shaved smooth? Trimmed? Hairy?
Needed her asking him how he liked looking at her boobs, she had seen him peeking.
Can he imaging how good it would be to have her wrap them around his cock so he coulf fuck them?
She could have told him how sensitive they were. And she could have played with them, describing how it felt, and told him all about it.
Four stars.
