All Comments on 'Femdom Gangster Story Pt. 10'

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hvaljkabrhvaljkabralmost 2 years agoAuthor

Here is the link for my Patreon - https://www.patreon.com/femstories?fan_landing=true

There are other stories there.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

We were all rooting for the pretty lady psychopaths rather than the male ones,but the storytelling lacked tension the outcome was never in doubt.Also we could do with more detail in the sex scenes.Still a creditable effort.

hvaljkabrhvaljkabralmost 2 years agoAuthor

I agree that this story is flawed in some ways. It is my first story of this type. But I think my second one will be much better. I do agree that the girls were also psychotic. But at least their code was not to hurt the innocent.

There is one more chapter of this story. It is not over yet

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