All Comments on 'Feminine Destiny'

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lovesexyshoeslovesexyshoesabout 2 years ago

Great job 5 stars.

Noticed one typo.

I started to associate with her, yes with him not him,

vickiebonnevickiebonneabout 2 years ago

I loved everything but the spitting. Please keep writing.

ChloecrossedChloecrossedabout 2 years ago

Super hot story! Loved it! Xxxx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Nice pace of the story line. The piece ends a little abrupt, but leaves it open for a chapter two or more.

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