All Comments on 'Ferris Wheel Flashing'

by TWeston

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II_7II_7almost 3 years ago

Incredibly sex story. The best I've ever read. I thought when she was on the Ferris Wheel, she was so turned on she was going to throw down all her clothes. That would have been so hot, but your ending was better.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It was good, however you failed biology 101, after vigorously stuffing 3 fingers up her cunt not going to be anything left to break through lol. Yes still a virgin in that she hadn't had a cock in her. Otherwise nope.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Pretty great read but always amazes me when authors can't remember a character's name for an entire story so change it halfway through, then don't bother to proof read to catch crap like that.

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Writer and editor of more than a hundred articles, short stories, and books. I love writing, and I write for me. I love to create fictional stories, putting people into circumstances I wish were mine. And I love to edit stories for other writers.