All Comments on 'Fertility Check'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
The off to the Police

Show them the abrasions on his ankles, the DNA on the panties and he's about to send some people to prison and collect a nice payday as he shuts the clinic down.

Dumb.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Fun story!

Great hot doctor and nurse fantasy. Well done describing how normal everything is medically until the very last minute when things take a turn for the better. Well done. Whoever commented early clearly has no sense of fantasy.

AcfchiefAcfchiefover 5 years ago

Would love an exam like that!

AnonymousAnonymous6 days ago

Good premise.

But sex was too automatic. Too mechanical.

No dialog exploring about his masturbastory practices? How often? What did he think about when masturbating? Was he in a rush to cum? Or did he take his time?

Please show us how you do it.

Does he have a girlfriend? Does she give you handjobs? Do you like them? What do you to to/for her?

Three stars.

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